this is beautifully written. i especially love your use of color words and descriptions to bring the chaotic atmosphere to life. it's a really refreshing read.

i look forward to more dogs fics from you in the future!

This is just so beautiful. I want more, please! Great job.

you need a follow up to this bb, a full blown fic, chapters if needed! ;)

REALLY good. Poetic, and emotional!