I would love to see you continue this...maybe show what happened once she finally got to the same time again. I loved this story.

Moon-chan out!

I smell a good story! I loved it! It was really good and I loved the attention paid to detail. Lord of the Rings 4ever! :P It was really goood though... Five stars!

I love it! Now that I've finally read it completely through.

I was just imagining me having a conversation with a clone of myself. That'd be very...interesting to say the least.

Woo Artemis isn't playing games anymore. Good story by the way.

You should have a sequel to the story where you go through the 8 years and so how things change. It was a very good story and like the concept to continue it. If you don't I will if that's okay with you when I have time to do it.

Too bad Artemis didn't let her clone move in with her and Wally . He could wake up every morning with Artemis on both sides sleeping with their heads on his chest . And he could make love to both of them every night . Wally would think he was in heaven . I could just see Nightwing and the other guys on the team and the league when they found out . T

Greatest artemis wally story I've ever read. And I've read alot of good ones. I don't know if there are young justice paper back novels out there like the justice league one I have read. Like one about wally as the flash called stop motion, but this was better than any of them I have read. You should write books.

this was an amazing story oh gosh. i loved every second of it.

The plot of this story is amazing and very well thought out. I also surprisingly did not get lost like I do with other complicated plot stories. Your characterization of Artemis and Wally were both spot on. The clones were also very clever, and it's a shame they didn't go that path in the series.

This story mindf***ed me epically, but it was so awesome! Great job!

WWOOOOWW this was an AWESOME story full of drama but fluff at the end it was just perfect :P it was soo cool especially when they get back together ;D

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I MEAN SERIOUSLY, THE SPITFIRE WAS BRILLIANT YES, BUT ALSO THE GROWTH IN THE RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN EACH TEAM MEMBER WAS GORGEOUS, IT'S WHAT I'VE BEEN WANTING FOR THE SHOW THE GROWTH IN CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT HOLY

AND THE ACTION, LAWD. THE ACTION WAS PERFECTION. I LOVE LOVEY DOVEY STUFF AS MUCH AS THE NEXT RAGING FANGIRL BUT I GET SO ANNOYED WHEN THAT'S ALL IT'S ABOUT, THE ACTION, THE PLOT WUA9EPIJOSDFLKWAHOUDFJKLSX,HIWOAUDFJKSOWIES

THE PLOT.

IT WAS JUST...I MEAN MY HEART WAS RACING AND I SCREAMED B/C I GOT SO AFRAID AND IT WAS LIKE I WAS IN THE STORY AND

I don't know how to recover...from this brilliance.

I enjoyed reading this. The plot of the story was very original and interesting.

It took me 6 hours to read this whole story... IT WAS TOTALLY WORTH IT!
Beautiful. Just beautiful.