Your writing is always amazing, especially your RobbieJade, and this piece is no different. It's so raw and real and I love it to bits. Don't ever stop writing for this ship.

perfect.

I have no idea why I didn't review this story when I first read it. I'm sorry about that but I just wanted to let you know how much I loved it. Great job.

Adorable. I loved it. :)

This was really flawless, okay? Like I'm gonna die because it's so flawless!

Oh, this story broke my heart a few times and then mended it. Robbie (in theory) is my favorite Victorious character. Your writing is poignant and lovely, and the story has a good voice throughout. This was a nice birthday present for me to find. :)

This story is the relationship Jade would form with Robbie. It being built on talking and personality, more than sex. Really great job showing hoe Jade shares a true deep bond with Robbie. Well Done

I know you said it was supposed to be disjointed, but it feels anything but. The different shards of the story all fit together like they're from the same broken window or something. There's really nothing I can say needs improvement, because the whole thing was really vivd and flowed amazingly. I'd love to see you write more for this pairing that explores the way other people look at them...or don't look at them maybe? If you want help with ideas or anything flick me a PM...anything for you to continue this :P haha