aaah! what, you ended it? you have to continue!

I really like the way you've started this story. It sounds like it will be really interesting.

Oh that was good. I have just read this and I just love amons vocabulary and how he said "I have an idea" idk why but I love that line. Great job overall but just one thing; at the time of Avatar Korra they didn't have guns so how would he know about them? Just noting it nothing big

Really hope you continue this; I really, REALLY enjoyed it. You're right; the dynamics of this ship are terribly fascinating and fun to play with. And your Amon is so, so good at being bad. I love it when people actually get that he had a point, and it all went right over Korra's head.

I DON'T SLEEP. I WAIT.
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for the next update :)

GIVE ME MORE. No really. I'm hooked. Your writing is fantastic! I love how much detail and thought you put into it... but I'm disappointed there isn't more Dx

Soooooooo good! I could eat the tension3

I adore this. My current obsession (quite insatiable) is Korra x Amon, Amon more specifically and out of any story I have read so far (and there have been many) this is the finest one of all. The characters are marvelously exact, the story is paced well, and the way that it's written is, to put it simply, awesome. Thank you. I look forward to further chapters. Please!

This is really promising! i like the way you express emotions and all! Amon and Korra are really in character! Great job here

I knew it, right from the moment I began to ship Amorra, I KNEW YOU WOULD WRITE IT! You are my hero! THANK YOU SO MUCH!

Please update soon, along with Ad Infinitum haha. 3

I KNEW IT! I KNEW YOU WOULD SHIP THIS OMG I LOVE YOU! I knew my favourite Tomione author would UNDERSTAND ME OMFG I LOVE YOU PLEASE MARRY ME I'm crying omfg kajdshkajshdjkashdjkas

Eagerly awaiting Chapter 3.

*Subscribed*

I love how you're writing the dynamic between those two - the powerplay, the intimidation, the fear... And I can't help but sympathise with Amon. His methods may be extreme, but the man does have a point.

Can't wait to see what happens next. Hope you update soon!

This is great!

This is positively delicious and addicting.

Rarely have I stumbled upon the relationship between two adversaries explored to such depth in fanfiction- and what I love about it is that your so down-to-earth. No pretentious prose, no 5 syllable adjectives- but your words send chills down my spine nonetheless.

PLEASE update soon! :)