Whoa. Great job, the last few chapters had me on the edge of my seat. I love the brotherly relationship here, the way they worried about one another or felt guilty. And I laughed at Phineas' freak-out session when that one guy was going to ask him for pickles. xD Like I said before, those last chapters had me reading this to the very end. Perhaps the resolution was easy, but hey! It's original. Most people would just have Phineas build the machine in the nick of time.

LOVED IT!
My best friend and i read it all in a day and are thinking about posting some of our own Phineas and Ferb fanfiction!
Keep posting more stories!
Again: LOVETHEM! MAKE MORE PLEASE! -D

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Kat ;-)

Love it

Yay! Another awesome fic finished! So far, I have loved all of your work! I love how they are all centered on Phineas' and Ferb's relationship as brothers. I think you may be my new favorite author. _

Frodo the Second

Haha, this one's great too! :) I love the random words triggering random things. How do you come up with all these wacky predicaments? ;)

Aw what a sweet ending. I was getting worried there for a moment. Poor Ferb.

Hmmm... It could have had a more fulfilling resolve, but it was still pretty good. Overall the entire idea was clever and well-thought out. Personally, I thought Ferb talked a bit too much, but he is older.

Great story!

What? THIS IS SO INTENSE!

This is so creative!

I think Candace would be a bit nicer

Wow! This really is great!

It's really hard to keep thoughts out of your mind. Poor Phineas. PICKLES!

Wow! It's a good thing I decided to check out your other works! Love this one so far despite its clichéness.

Great chapters.

This story was really interesting and I really liked it. If I like your other stories too I'll probably put you on my favorite authors list. XD

Oh that was great. A good laugh and my heart gave jolts at the suspense. This is definitely going on my favorites.