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Pleaseeee make a sequel im beggin you. If u make a sequel i would start writing fanfictions and donate the first one to you. Plesaee i fell in live with your story. Fuck anybody who hated the parings but i absolutely love this story. ive read it 20 times no fuckin lie. All my friends are reading it too. They want you to make a sequel. pleassssseeeeee continue im diein to know what youre comin up wiyh nect. Thank you_

i would have them not in a relationship but what i would do is have cameron and sasha make-up and get back together and have cameron get revenge on dilan and have chloe and dilan get together or chloe and eithan get together.

No! Don't end it! Keep writing! Do you know how good I think this story is? (6 out of 5) PS: I like Sasha/Koby

I like Sasha and Dylan, to me it's a nice mix of passive and more in control - but I don't know. As far as Cameron getting that disease, it did not surprise me... and Cloe having it and giving it off to him - it was well played but didn't surprise me in the least, it's karma lmao. And karma is a good candidate to fuck you in the ass with a cactus xD

This had a very abrupt ending, but it serves as a cliffhanger to go right into the next story so I understand.

I'm off to start reading the sequel now!
Keep writing, don't stop ;)

Well, well! One hell of a lot happened in this chapter and that's for sure! xD I took it all in and really embraced the roles here. Sasha is so full of anger - but even with a calm mind I don't think I could ever truly forgive Cloe for all she did. Or if I did, I'd never be able to trust her again, and trust is a big, huge thing that needs to be present. If it's not, nothing can happen, develop or grow.

There's only one more chapter!
Reading on :)

I have always personally portrayed Dylan as that lovable class clown type that maybe has some issues of his own, but he puts a smile on and he'd rather make other people happy/feel better/smile than worry about himself y'know? But I like that it was Dylan to stop and comfort Sasha. And he's not all prick because if he was, he would've tried to pull some serious moves on Sasha, knowing she's sad and vulnerable - but he didn't and that proves how great of a guy he truly is. (It also doesn't help that Dylan is my absolute favorite guy lmao of course I have positive feedback for him xD)

And I'm still pissed at Cameron and Cloe XD I know they're like the canon couple, but to me... both being blond haired and blue eyed, they look too much alike to actually be a couple - but maybe that's just me and my own preferences.

Reading on, only two more chapters left! :)

Well, well ... it wasn't quite a twist that I wasn't expecting... or maybe I'm just waiting on the drama explosion lmao but don't worry about the length of the chapter. Quality does not equal quantity. Anyway, this was a pretty good chapter and I can't wait to continue reading! :)

Good song, as the chapter title ;D

I couldn't help but to feel that when Cameron said to Sasha that he loved her... that it was fake. I maybe felt that way because he did not share the entire truth with his girlfriend. And it was very little truth that he did share. Cloe seems to think she's going to get what she wants, but I think she has another thing coming to her XD

Reading on! :)

That is the problem with radio stations, they play the same shit over and over and over again. I'll just leave you with some alternate lyrics: WE FOUND DOVE IN A SOAPLESS PLAACEE! lmao I'm sorry, I had to. :D

Now, Cloe being full of herself in this chapter makes me want to slap a hoe. XD And that hoe in specifics. And well, I honestly can't wait to see what goes on in the next chapters, woo!

Reading on indefinintely XD

Ooh I feel Sash in the beginning of this chapter, I scare the piss out of my cat in the morning I swear lmao. So Cameron showed up at her house that morning... maybe it's just me but I sensed the fear and acting strange in that boy as soon as he used the word 'sexy' awkwardly twice in the greeting sentence XD

Y'know, I love Cameron - he's always been up there in my favorites... but now I don't really know what to think of him in this story lmao. I'm confused! XD Well not really... but part of me wants him to be a man and admit to what happened, whether he loses Sasha and Cloe, or whatever. There will be drama no matter where you go, what you do - *who* you do... but you can't keep running away from your problems and dodging shit just to 'avoid drama'. Cameron... grow some balls dude, admit what you did. Sasha deserves better. (It also peeved me off how he acted so damn sweet and what not in front of her mom and brother like he did nothing wrong, that made me want to strangle him xD)

This just gets better and better.
Definitely reading on!

Well, I can't really say that I'm surprised this happened. If a girl knows how to press a guy's buttons juusstt right... she can get anywhere with him, no matter the guy. So she gets her way with Cameron and I'll bet any amount of money that it was Sasha calling Cameron innocently in the middle of the night.

And no worries girl! The music is good. Hope you're not mad at all my reviews xD

Reading on and loving every second!

This was a really a GREAT chapter! Cloe was so devious, but I love it. And I loved how she thought of it as 'badass' lmao. I mean, it shows that she's really not doing this out of pure spite and what not, she seems rather vulnerable about it. There's still an innocence to Cloe doing this. To me, it's because she just wants a chance with Cameron and she's somehow wounded at the fact that her playing hard to get, thinking she was getting somewhere with him, but he loses interest because he thinks she did... and moves on, much to her own dismay. There is an innocence in her actions, however her actions won't only benefit her, they'll hurt some others too and I don't think she's thinking clearly of the consequences to her actions as of yet. Something tells me she will soon though.

Great chapter!
Definitely reading on :)

Lmaooo I have to say, I absolutely lol'd when she actually dropped the bag and Dylan's reaction. I can see where Cameron would've been annoyed though. Well not so much annoyed as embarrassed. I mean at first she wanted the whole sex thing, then she called it off... then she bought toys and legitimately googled what to do with the vaseline lmaoo. That was such a funny, humorous twist that I loved XD

Cloe seemed to click with this Steven pretty quickly and he must really like her if he was the one who stuttered all over her XD something tells me she's not quite over Cameron though, it doesn't go that quickly. It just makes me anticipate reading more!

Keep up the amazing work! :)

This was a good second chapter, it takes us more into the unraveling issues of the girls, Jade's new found body image that she's certainly trying to upkeep naughtily xD and Sasha's worry about devoting herself to the idea of having sex with her boyfriend of a year.

Cloe's rather jealous and hurt at Sasha's relationship with Cameron - but I mean, she's gotta let it go xD She had a clear chance with him, as he stated on the drive home and she played 'hard to get' confusing the signal and he moved on. That's how life is sugarplum.

Well, this is getting better by the chapter for sure and I'm reading on!

P.s. I severely agree with Cameron and his feelings on JB lmao.