| Reviews for Ryusei Lovers |
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avidreader 2/3/13 . chapter 3 Changing a pilot's costume would be a great feature, mostly because the default pilot suit tends to be a little boring. |
geniusbot 1/19/13 . chapter 3 Just wanted to let you know that I'm highly enjoying this. Keep up the good work. |
Guest 7/22/12 . chapter 3 Well, now that was a good laugh. Really. I noticed that this time around the plot of SRW J and alpha 2 was fitted in there somewhere, but what really took my interest was Zanger going into the X Zone plot, since there he will see some people from Endless Frontier. Also, it may be too late to do a sujestion now, but it really turns disorientating when you put speech lines from different characters in the same paragraphs. Could you look up on that? |
Cabriel 7/22/12 . chapter 3It's a nice comedy. :) totally harem anime. |
lazylegionspark 4/29/12 . chapter 1Hot dang. This story was hilarious! I have always wanted to see a story like this. Latooni sure got a growth spurt. Now way Ryuusei was able to ignore that(and the kisses too). The most entertaining part was the betting between Tasuku and Kyosuke, that had me loling In terms of writting, the only thing I noted was that characters were speaking one right after another in the very same sentence, at times not identifying who they were occurring too often be ignored. Aside from that the fic was good and I enjoyed it. |