I like to see a love esene and this was so good. tanks.

I think I'm melting into a lovely warm puddle of goo - chocolate-mint flavoured. Please please please let Butcher give them at least a couple of scenes like this before he ends the world in the apocalyptic trilogy.

This really was a fantastic balance of fluff and in-character banter. Some of the dialogue made me grin in delight, and I love your decision to write it from Karrin's POV. Wonderful. :D

Very cool fic. Like the way it played out with Harry and Murph being together at last.

hahhahaahahahh!
megageek!
...actually i went to a party as padme once, but not the point...
really good :)

Very nice, always liked the Murphy and Dresden together. Those two have gone through so much together and I hoped that with the end of changes they would have finally cut all the crap and just done something together and of course Harry gets himself killed.

Luckily he's back now and I can't wait to see how Cold Days turns out. Anyway, very good story. They both seemed very in character and even managed to get past their usual bullshit defenses they keep up to keep everyone even each other at bay. Nice to see them bicker, love and still have that same spark they show in the book series. Well done.

This was lovely- very well written, heart-warming. You've got a knack for dialogue and a real feel for the voices of these characters. Quality-wise, this is easily a head and shoulders above most of the fanfiction I've read for Dresden Files.

I loved that! I totally see Harry as a Star Wars geek. D I really LOVED this story!

This is quite good, fits the characters and allows them a moment of happiness, something Jim really can't permit. Very good.

Awwwwww, cute! I have always wanted them together. I mean I liked Susan, but there was just something about Murph that I always liked. It was very good, and I love the star wars quotes, great geeky humor.

This was a gift from Nerdy Heaven. Wonderful and well written. You should be proud.

That was a lot of fun! Very cute and sexy! I do hope we get to see this tender side of Murphy and Dresden in upcoming books. :)

Very cute. Always love me some Harry/Karen action!

I like how you think Totenkinder Madchen, this is much much more than fluff. If I could find a girl that would love the geekyness part of a guy I would be in love too. Then again this is only fanfiction so book 1 life 0 so far, any way great story. Harry and Murphy don't get too many chance to indulge each other so this was something I'm sure most readers would be craving for. Might have over used saying his complete name more than once but using it right when she is on top of him mixed with star wars pet names... Perfect.

This was absolutely, utterly adorable Murphy/Dresden fluff! I loved this coming from Murphy's POV. You absolutely nailed both of their voices!

Well done!