| Reviews for Loyalty |
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foggraven 7/3/12 . chapter 6cornered by an experienced hunter XD |
foggraven 7/3/12 . chapter 4wasn't' expecting that |
foggraven 7/3/12 . chapter 1this is pretty interesting |
splitheart1120 5/30/12 . chapter 16It's funny how the past had such a huge affect on the present... |
splitheart1120 5/30/12 . chapter 15I wonder what Ash will find... |
Tanya Adams 64 5/29/12 . chapter 16Such a fascinating ending. Too bad the story has to end so soon. Great job as usual and look forward for more of stories in the near future. Tanya Adams 64 |
Hoenn Master96 5/29/12 . chapter 16Intriguing. Thank you for the entertainment. |
DeathGoblin 5/29/12 . chapter 16That was a satisfying ending, though I don;t think that last part needed to be labeled the epilogue, though it was separated by time from the rest of the chapters events. I like that fact that things start out mystical, but then the spirits all turn out to be pokemon, that was a nice twist. Also, since the ocean spirit was lugia, this thing did have something to do with legendary pokemon after all, I also like the idea of the vengeful spirits being absorbed by spiritomb and slowly passing on over time. The last comment from Ash (about Brock's sculptures of Lily) was a nice lighthearted way to end the story. |
Nafa-tali 5/29/12 . chapter 16Great conclision! It does leave me wanting more (as its left open) but I suppose thats the nature of the story hey ;)! |
Nafa-tali 5/29/12 . chapter 14I'll go man watching! Hahah Pixel is awesome! :D! |
Nafa-tali 5/29/12 . chapter 13Ohhh creepy! I think if I was living in the Poke-verse ghost types would be the type that freaked me out most. |
Rocketlord6485 5/28/12 . chapter 16Awesome final chapter! I'm so glad many of these questions were in answered in such depth, what with the exorcisms and flashbacks! Very exciting! Although, I might have missed something regarding the Lugia mention . . . :/ Hmmm I'm wondering where Ash and Misty's relationship will be headed now that they've pretty much settled their differences. Perhaps a continuation? :) Again, great little story! Well done! :D |
PhinalPhantasy 5/28/12 . chapter 16Very interesting conclusion. Does leave Ash and Misty's relationship open though. I liked this story overall. Great job |
WhiteEagle1985 5/28/12 . chapter 16Excellent way to finish! Thanks for writing such a great story! |
Axletia Rosonetis 5/28/12 . chapter 16And everything was back to normal. :D Yay |