|Reviews for Loyalty|
| foggraven 7/3/12 . chapter 6
cornered by an experienced hunter XD
| foggraven 7/3/12 . chapter 4
wasn't' expecting that
| foggraven 7/3/12 . chapter 1
this is pretty interesting
| splitheart1120 5/30/12 . chapter 16
It's funny how the past had such a huge affect on the present...
| splitheart1120 5/30/12 . chapter 15
I wonder what Ash will find...
| Tanya Adams 64 5/29/12 . chapter 16
Such a fascinating ending. Too bad the story has to end so soon. Great job as usual and look forward for more of stories in the near future.
Tanya Adams 64
| Hoenn Master96 5/29/12 . chapter 16
Intriguing. Thank you for the entertainment.
| DeathGoblin 5/29/12 . chapter 16
That was a satisfying ending, though I don;t think that last part needed to be labeled the epilogue, though it was separated by time from the rest of the chapters events. I like that fact that things start out mystical, but then the spirits all turn out to be pokemon, that was a nice twist. Also, since the ocean spirit was lugia, this thing did have something to do with legendary pokemon after all, I also like the idea of the vengeful spirits being absorbed by spiritomb and slowly passing on over time. The last comment from Ash (about Brock's sculptures of Lily) was a nice lighthearted way to end the story.
| Nafa-tali 5/29/12 . chapter 16
Great conclision! It does leave me wanting more (as its left open) but I suppose thats the nature of the story hey ;)!
| Nafa-tali 5/29/12 . chapter 14
I'll go man watching!
Hahah Pixel is awesome! :D!
| Nafa-tali 5/29/12 . chapter 13
Ohhh creepy! I think if I was living in the Poke-verse ghost types would be the type that freaked me out most.
| Rocketlord6485 5/28/12 . chapter 16
Awesome final chapter! I'm so glad many of these questions were in answered in such depth, what with the exorcisms and flashbacks! Very exciting! Although, I might have missed something regarding the Lugia mention . . . :/
Hmmm I'm wondering where Ash and Misty's relationship will be headed now that they've pretty much settled their differences. Perhaps a continuation? :)
Again, great little story! Well done! :D
| PhinalPhantasy 5/28/12 . chapter 16
Very interesting conclusion. Does leave Ash and Misty's relationship open though. I liked this story overall. Great job
| WhiteEagle1985 5/28/12 . chapter 16
Excellent way to finish! Thanks for writing such a great story!
| Axletia Rosonetis 5/28/12 . chapter 16
And everything was back to normal. :D Yay