Reviews for Loyalty
foggraven 7/3/12 . chapter 6
cornered by an experienced hunter XD
foggraven 7/3/12 . chapter 4
wasn't' expecting that
foggraven 7/3/12 . chapter 1
this is pretty interesting
splitheart1120 5/30/12 . chapter 16
It's funny how the past had such a huge affect on the present...
splitheart1120 5/30/12 . chapter 15
I wonder what Ash will find...
Tanya Adams 64 5/29/12 . chapter 16
Such a fascinating ending. Too bad the story has to end so soon. Great job as usual and look forward for more of stories in the near future.

Tanya Adams 64
Hoenn Master96 5/29/12 . chapter 16
Intriguing. Thank you for the entertainment.
DeathGoblin 5/29/12 . chapter 16
That was a satisfying ending, though I don;t think that last part needed to be labeled the epilogue, though it was separated by time from the rest of the chapters events. I like that fact that things start out mystical, but then the spirits all turn out to be pokemon, that was a nice twist. Also, since the ocean spirit was lugia, this thing did have something to do with legendary pokemon after all, I also like the idea of the vengeful spirits being absorbed by spiritomb and slowly passing on over time. The last comment from Ash (about Brock's sculptures of Lily) was a nice lighthearted way to end the story.
Nafa-tali 5/29/12 . chapter 16
Great conclision! It does leave me wanting more (as its left open) but I suppose thats the nature of the story hey ;)!
Nafa-tali 5/29/12 . chapter 14
I'll go man watching!

Hahah Pixel is awesome! :D!
Nafa-tali 5/29/12 . chapter 13
Ohhh creepy! I think if I was living in the Poke-verse ghost types would be the type that freaked me out most.
Rocketlord6485 5/28/12 . chapter 16
Awesome final chapter! I'm so glad many of these questions were in answered in such depth, what with the exorcisms and flashbacks! Very exciting! Although, I might have missed something regarding the Lugia mention . . . :/

Hmmm I'm wondering where Ash and Misty's relationship will be headed now that they've pretty much settled their differences. Perhaps a continuation? :)

Again, great little story! Well done! :D
PhinalPhantasy 5/28/12 . chapter 16
Very interesting conclusion. Does leave Ash and Misty's relationship open though. I liked this story overall. Great job
WhiteEagle1985 5/28/12 . chapter 16
Excellent way to finish! Thanks for writing such a great story!
Axletia Rosonetis 5/28/12 . chapter 16
And everything was back to normal. :D Yay
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