| Reviews for My neighbor, the serial killer |
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CrazySue05 2/22/13 . chapter 15Fabulous chapter as always! Glad you're back! Two things: In your Sylaire Community, you don't have anything from devilishlysas and she is BEYOND amazing! Or remuslives! Also, you most definitely need to post your TVD/Heroes fic...I will love you forever! |
WOWcow 2/13/13 . chapter 15Ahh! This story keeps getting better and better! I absolutely adore it and I love the way you write. All the characters are so well written and I'm loving the Sylaire that's going on. Plus Ryan is just the cutest! There are so many twists and turns like Angela, Noah and Rene being involved behind everything. Can't wait for more :) Also I would love to do a challenge but I haven't written in a while and I'm not great with characterisation. Still I'd love to try... |
heroesfan1 2/13/13 . chapter 15It's like you're trying to break my heart here*sniffs* This chapter was amazeballs, there was so much emotion behind the words, not to mention humor(Peter and Micah!XD) I really loved this, and I'm just crossing my fingers for Claire;) Thanks so much for the recommendation, I really appreciate it*hug*;) *applauds* ;) |
Guest 2/12/13 . chapter 15 Yay, so glad to see you writing again. I love the way Sylar is all panicked and blaming it on being left with Ryan (when we all know he actually worried about Claire). I hope to see more soon! |
KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFun 2/12/13 . chapter 15Rene? Oh my...oh my...I hope you and your writers block have talked-because this-this calls for an update, like sooooon! |
WOWcow 2/12/13 . chapter 1Hehe... I could totally see that happening especially the interaction between Claire, Rose and Sylar. It makes me wonder (without having read the rest of the story) if Peter somehow knew all of this and deliberately set Claire up in the apartment. After all he was the intermediary... Can't wait to read more but I unfortunately have to go after just one chapter :( |
xKiiwiii 2/12/13 . chapter 15Oh, poor Sy :( I should feel sad for him but I love how Micah is mocking him :D The part from Ryan's point of view is really great, I love the boy and how he is in so many ways similar to Gabriel. I hope he will bring Claire and Sylar closer together :) I know writers block sucks but the chapter was worth waiting. |
justforme83 2/11/13 . chapter 15I freaked out when I saw you post this on Tumblr. My body was so ready for this! 3 |
justforme83 1/23/13 . chapter 14I loved this story for so long. I was so floored when I saw it was you who had written this! I feel like we just connected through your tumblr. Ahh you have written my favorite Heroes stories. I love you! :) |
scifigrl10 1/22/13 . chapter 14I think that's exactly what you should do! (And soon!) I really like this story! :) |
EmoScene 12/28/12 . chapter 1LOLOL. Oh, god. Because it's late I can't laugh, so it was even funnier. And I'm just sitting on my bed trying to contain my laughter right now. HAHAHHA. Love the story so far. :) xoxo. |
Lily snape 11/19/12 . chapter 4 I agree. I my three faces were Claire, sylar, and Peter. I'm hoping you don't cheese out on sylar like up fans do with snape in romances. I don't see sylar ever not being violent. Maybe not a killer, but definitely agressive and doing something to fill his thirst for blood |
Donna 11/15/12 . chapter 14 Aha! New chappie! And I totally understand the whole writers block thing, but I am oh so glad you were able to get past it for this marvelous work. And of course Angela would be pulling strings all along. I know some people don't like her for that particular trait, but that's something that makes me adore her character all the more. Wonderfully written, cannot wait until you post more! :) |
ArtsyreaderVOI 11/13/12 . chapter 14Awesome! I suggest claires point of view first! _ |
Anei 11/13/12 . chapter 14Oh my goodness! What a chapter. I feel the hollowness in my stomach. I'm scared for Angela's future. Have you ever considered that she sees only a hopeless future because she only sees the worse in people? I found this chapter very unlike your usual chapters. It was heavily poetic. It fit nicely since this was a take on Angela. The whole chapter was like a puzzle. Confusing. Just like her. I loved this chapter. You captured her complexity and her 'angst' so well! One thing I have learned is that her dreams are never what they seem. It was a heartbreaking dream, but at the moment, it kinda plays on how Sylar and Claire left off. Sylar completely shattered and Claire, confused, alone and lost-misguided, even. I liked how we went back in the past to see how things got shapped up. I think I'd like to hear how Sylar feels about Claire leaving. I feel as if Seeing Sylar suffer proves how good he can be and that he is like you and I. He has feelings. He does love. I find that showing the extent of his pain shows the potential of goodness he can give. Congrats to your official debut on the web site! Oh and I almost forgot, thanks for the mention! I'm still working on the next chapter. Hope it doesn't take too long to finish it up. I'm impatiently waiting for your next chapter! |