This is an excellent fanfic! I love Age of Five Trilogy (think it's better than BMT) and am longing to read more on that. Please continue :)

All italics is hard to read. I can't really make heads or tails of this otherwise, either. The main character is thinking it's a shame the other immortals don't like the gods, then fantasizes about how awesome the future world with the gods forgotten will be. Then it's just listing what the different characters will do, followed by a lot of characters talking about other characters that don't have any context to me. As far as I can tell, this seems like an extended setup to explain the present situation, but I can't tell what of it's the plot and what's just detail. It seems excessive, but I can't exactly be sure of that.

An interesting start. Keep updating