Nicely done :) I like what you've done with the story so far, and also I really hope that you intend to count Ramses's daughter as his firstborn or somehow let their (maya/nefertari and ramses) baby survive the upcoming plagues :( I look forward to the next chapter!

love this and i can't wait to read about when the baby is born, update soon please : )

I like it.

Loved it! I am like it alot can't wait for the final chapters

that was pretty interesting! I loved how you made everything so official and realistic! it was good! cant wait for an update:)

I did start reading Michelle Moran's books! I read Nefertiti in like 3 days it was soo good! I just bought the Heretic Queen and im so excited to start it:)

Please continue. Also can Maya have twins? I cna't bare the thought of her loosing her kid.

Yikes wonder how Moses will react add more soon please keep going welcome back been a long time coming

Oh man they are so screwed when Moses comes back! Remember the first born dies! I always cry on that part. But it's nice to get an update for this story. I can't wait to see what happens!

I liked the story. I am really exicted for the final chapters

Loving this! I love Maya and her relationship with Rameses is depicted wonderfully. I can't wait to read more :)

I love the story, I can't wait for the next chapter's.

this is so sweet

Oh how i love this story:) you are doing such a great job. It's really keeping me on my toes. The plot is wonderful. Your character development is stupendous. I hope Moses and Maya are reunited!

Cool story, but if you allow me to ask; God will appear for who? Moses or Maya? after all, now Hebrews have 2 saviors.
Any way, keep writing, i love this story.

Oh my gosh NOOOOOO! Their baby is gonna die! When Moses comes to town all hell breaks lose. Literally! I'm happy you updated though! *happy dance* keep it up I'm excited! :-)