It's nice to see a fanfic actually categorised correctly, I have to admit :D Enjoyed this, especially the sharp and interesting voice of your protagonist. There were a few grammar and punctuation issues I noticed with your dialogue where capitals and full stops/periods were being used oddly, like this:

"sure."

"Versimilitude." Was the only one I caught.

Where it should be like this:

"Sure."

"Versimilitude," was the only one I caught.

It's not a huge deal, but it'd tidy the fic up a bit. Thank you for writing, and best of luck x

awww i like it, but i wish it was longer _

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like it! you're right... there are not many good A-list fics out there. you should continue this one!

Nice job! I enjoyed reading that:)