|Reviews for She seems real|
| Edhla 4/28/13 . chapter 1
It's nice to see a fanfic actually categorised correctly, I have to admit :D Enjoyed this, especially the sharp and interesting voice of your protagonist. There were a few grammar and punctuation issues I noticed with your dialogue where capitals and full stops/periods were being used oddly, like this:
"Versimilitude." Was the only one I caught.
Where it should be like this:
"Versimilitude," was the only one I caught.
It's not a huge deal, but it'd tidy the fic up a bit. Thank you for writing, and best of luck x
| animefanime16 10/17/12 . chapter 1
awww i like it, but i wish it was longer _
| stef 9/9/12 . chapter 1
| mjs1196 7/15/12 . chapter 1
like it! you're right... there are not many good A-list fics out there. you should continue this one!
| MeRoNa119 6/11/12 . chapter 1
Nice job! I enjoyed reading that:)