| Reviews for Shenanigans |
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middlekertz 5/6/13 . chapter 8TELL ME THE RULES. Please. |
kiralol101 4/30/13 . chapter 8Hehehehe. Amai is so cute, I loved how she kept on saying Boo...Booooooo. Jin is adorable i can't not say it. Plus he is such a gentle-demon, epscially when he refused to do anything sexual or even kiss her (WAAAHHHH JIN YOUR SO AWESOME). He is so protective of her, I would love to see him jelouse. I think I like how, though she is drunk, Amai is bing very open with Jin. The most hilarious part is when he friend comes out and is like "Stupid we don't go home with guys, oh wait its Jin...that's cool". That sounds like my friends. Hehehe She said Ilove you right? At the end? He said it back! YYYEEEAAA! I hope you update soon. :) Oh and I like how you are keeping her human as possible, it actually creates a very cool difference between her and Jin. I think maybe she is training to control her power? Anyway awesome chapter. |
I'm Not Psychotic. I'm Gifted 4/18/13 . chapter 7Ahhh! Ending it there. I hope there is a little more cuteness in the next chapter. I do love this story, btw. And basically whatever you write. You're awesome. Here, have a Zoidberg: (\/) (·,,,·) (\/) woop woop woop! |
kiralol101 4/17/13 . chapter 7First off, I am so sorry for your loss. I also understand how busy things can get, I have no life right now because school wants to rule everything I do and I am in a sorority, and it is a big responsibility. So I completely understand and don't worry about it, take things in stride and everything will fall into place. This chapter was awesome. I like how she still has a human life and even gos to parties. Especially when it involves alchohol, that somehow always ends up with people doing crazy things, which in this case would be asking Jin about their relationship (which I have a feeling that she wouldn't have asked if sober), plus alchohol does make a person more truthful. I think Amai is a funny drunk. Her little song about Jin made my day. It was so hilarious. Also becasue she was drinking Gin and thinking about Jin. Bahahha. I was wondering where she stood with Jin also, and exactly how he saw it. I think he is adorable on ow he wants what Yusuke has, but isn't sure. I mean he is like a free bird after all. Amai and Jin, man they need to make something up already. And I love how despite what she asked, he still teased her. And wht about those cigarettes? Lol Update when you can :) |
CrazyCreator33 4/16/13 . chapter 7Sorry to hear about your family, that same thing has happened to me within the past few months. I feel for you 3 As it is, Im glad you are back and thought that Amai ask a drunk was funny. What will happen when Jin takes her home now? I can't wait to see :) |
middlekertz 3/12/13 . chapter 6That's so cute. |
CrazyCreator33 3/9/13 . chapter 6Your hair looks great today! Seriously, though, I enjoyed the family dynamic :) time fir another drabble where Amai actually initiates something, in my opinion :p How would Jin react if SHE caught HIM off guard? |
kiralol101 3/9/13 . chapter 6This is so adorable. I love how the kids wanted to name the puppy Jin, and no matter what they did not budge. It is cute, Jin is like a puppy if you think about it. Then there was Jin Jin, the real Jin, oh my Gosh you portray him well. I find it so cute when he makes he blush. Also I like how he kisses her modestly and not just full on the lips, cause thatis how she is. I also love how you tied in that she is fighting for her family at the end. Great update! |
CrazyCreator33 1/24/13 . chapter 5I really do enjoy a good Jin fic, in my opinion there aren't enough of them. Your couple of Jin and Amai is just so darn cute! I can't wait for you next installment! |
kiralol101 1/21/13 . chapter 5They are so cute together. I love how she freaked out when her mom asked her who she was talking too. I love how Jin is so sly and just so Irish. Hahahaha. They are just absolutely adorable when they act weird like that and in the end it was just a perfect moment. Glad you updated. |
soul painter 1/19/13 . chapter 4Yay! Another chapter! Is there gonna be some more romance in the next one, cuz that's what I'm hoping for :) please update soon! |
soul painter 1/16/13 . chapter 3Wow this is great! Do you update regularly? I'd really like to read another chapter :) |
AZURE DRAGON 9/15/12 . chapter 3 I like the "Do you mind" and "No particularly" bit. Very good. One thing to mind is your spacing between paragraphs because there appears to be a couple places where the lines are too close together. Otherwise, very nice! |
Evalyd Yamazaki 9/16/12 . chapter 3This was a nice chapter. I thought Amai's reaction to everything Spirit World related was pretty realistic; I mean, I would try to get away from them too! I thought Jin made some pretty good points about all demons being diffrent, just like humans. Also, will we find out who Miko is exactly? And will we be seeing any of the other's Jin hangs out with? Good luck on the next chapter! |
kiralol101 9/16/12 . chapter 3Awww this is sweet. I could imagine Jin giving a lecture to humans on demons. The whole part with the hand. Adorable. Yes very much sooo. I just love him being so...him. I don't know, you capture Jin perfectly. he is solo enable and adorable. Yay Jin. This was cute. Update when you can. |