Things I liked about this chapter: the twins sleeping in Josh's lap, James's smashing invention, Ben's towel (someone should use that for a spoof or something), and ESPECIALLY that sarcarstic drone... made by Warren nonetheless! XD

Things I didn't like about this chapter... I quote: "Isn't it obvious?"
I bet a cyber-biscuit that Elliq is coming back out again...

WAH! My Caleb! Nooooooo!

Oh no... You are absolutely horrible Qille. I hope you know that. I love you but you are horrible to your readers, and your characters.
Great chapter as always though... just felt slightly rushed...

...Rock and a hard place man...rock and a hard place...

Sorry I didn't review sooner. My family and I were on Spring Break and our campground didn't have WiFi. :(

But anyway...CALEB! MY BABY! Why must you be a victim to SFCMD! Poor sweetie.

And Andrew...so kind! Giving his warmth to Caleb even though he knew what would happen. 3

And Christopher...GO DIE! ALL OF MY PITY IS FOR YOU IS GONE! IF CALEB DIES, I WILL HELP JEN KILL YOUR ASS!

Great update! Can't wait for the next one.

WHAT!? But I thought the bullet hit James! (Gotta read that part again...)
"And he couldn't help but notice one particularly deep scar stretching across his right wrist." *shudders* Do I even WANT to know?
I love that you found a way to put the 7-almost-doing-something-to-1's-neck here ;) Seriously, when I found out the reason, I started frying-panning my (imaginary) 1-pinata... which I should probably create in real life...
Andrew sure needs a lot of time to realise stuff... I mean, I was already thinking he could warm the place up as soon as they mentioned the temperature!
'What will happen next'? Ummm... how about the Franken!6 I mentioned before?
...NAAAAH, that's just silly. XD

Hmm...
So let me get this straight. In Chapter 8, Christopher saw what Caleb did to himself. Then Christopher 'tells' Caleb not to tell to anyone or not to reveal Caleb's wound (My guess Christopher got Subliminal Messaging because Christopher 'tells' Caleb by sending a message by placing his hand on Caleb's shoulder ) . When Caleb tells to Andrew, Ben and Jen that he manually took out all of the metal fragments from his body except the bullet (But it was revealed to be a Pitch), Jen got angry to Christopher for being a coward that almost killed Caleb.
Or my calculations are just wrong...

Oh dear god...that was... not the grossest thing I've ever read...but pretty close...

Lemme guess...nah not a clue

"We are on nobody's side because nobody is on ours"...nicely done.

The only thing I'd worry about is that this chapter hardly deviates at all from the movie..

I think stuff is going to happen next :D
Wow... Intense much? But, great chapter as always, so I'm not complaining. You are extremely talented when it comes to keeping your readers engaged. I just keep reading thinking 'Whats going to happen next?!' like, every other sentence :D

:O... Oh. My. Goodness...I-I mean, the whole time I was like *shocked* and then I was like hahahaha and then I was like No don't do that! and then I was like T_T... It's an epic rollercoaster of emotions!

...so the lightning will be needed to revive Caleb? *cringe...Frankestein...LOL* But what happened to him? Was it because of the shock at the first half of this chapter?

And, before I forget, what did Christopher ask him at that point?

Yeah...I never even got what the 'arrow to the knee' joke was about... EXPLAIN, PEOPLE! EXPLAIN! It's not my fault that I'm so new to internet memes!

Dang... You and your stinkin' cliff hangers! WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO US QILLE?! WHY?!

Anyways! Great chapter as always! I did see that at the place where Caleb wrote 'Help me' the word before that was missing an 'S'. But other than that no errors in conventions.
I always forget which Graceling is who though...
Here is what I KNOW:
Christopher is 1
The Twins are 3 and 4
Caleb is 6
Jen is 7
and Andrew is 9
What I THINK:
Ben is 2
James is 5
Josh is 8

Okay, sorry. I just thought of two random questions that I forgot to put in my review.

1) Do you ship JohnLock?
2) Have you ever thought about writing a movie script for a really violent/gorey horror/slasher film? Seriously! I don't really like those types of films, but if you were involved in one, I'd drop everything I was doing to se it. :)

Thanks for your time. ;D

Okay, first of all, the quote was from Moraity (fail at spelling), Sherlock BBC, Season 2, Episode 6, The Reichenbach Falls. I just got into Sherlock, so I fangirled so hard when I read that.

Second, I can't help myself...
James: I was once a super-cool old-guy who could control electricity, then I took a bullet to the knee.
*Shields self from spoon*

Third, my feeks are forever broken...thanks alot, Elliq. They were bruised when I read that Warren flatlined. They were cut when Warren hit the fan. They were MURDURED when Christopher revealed that Warren was his nephew. They EXPLODED out of my chest like Cloverfield Parasites when Warren was still alive. Poor sweetheart.

My brother hit me over the head when I was reading this...I was screaming so bad. :)

...hubububububububububuubububub ububububububu...

You are getting better at this torturing thing...