Love love love this story, and I like the hunger games too! Had a mocingjay bracelet that broke so now it's a mockingjay necklace

I love how you made a birthmarked fanfic but I thought I should tell you that in the first book they did say that hospitals don't exist in the enclave because they give false hope. That kid of makes it hard for me to understand these parts but keep going I love it :)

When in the world did Leon get put back in prison?!

It's certianly interesting, but your sentence structure is a bit choppy and there are quite a few really easy-to-fix typos.

Thank you for taking the time to write this!
After finishing the book, I immediately went on to fanfiction, and I was like, WTF THERE'S ONLY 1 FANFICTION FOR THIS WONDERFUL BOOK?!
That said, I liked this fanfiction a lot, although it got kinda confusing at times.

Awesome books:
Birthmarked by Caragh o'brien
Divergent by Veronica Roth
Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins
Legend by Marie Lu -Read this. It's UBER GOOD!

Very interesting! I like it, and it's written well. I'm only on chapter one, but I want to see where it goes. I hope that it's Leon in the end. I mean, I like Peter and all, but I honestly like him least (after Will, and Leon's my favorite!) anyway, great job no matter what :)

why... did... you... end... in ... a ... cliffhanger...?
really why. this is so good and awesome. Why did you end it in a cliffhanger?
Update soon!

I KNEW LEON WASN'T AN IDIOT! GOOD JOB LEON!
okay... gaia has some pretty awesome loyalty. Going to go save someone she barely knows.
wait what... kyle is ALIVE! OMG YES! SO EMILY WONT GO INSANE! :D

O_o LEON SAVE GAIA NOW! YOU IDIOT DONT STAND THERE! AND GAIA DONT GIVE UP! THERE WAS STILL HOPE OMG! O_O

Nooooooooooooooooooooooo WHY WOULD YOU MAKE GAIA GO GET AN EXECUATION? WHY? WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT? *sobs*

and the last bit. OMG ITS ALL MY FAVORITE BOOKS COMBINED! :D

OH MY GOODNESS! she was related to the person! thats sooo cool! Good back story. I was wondering why Rhea was like that but I think there's more... I can feel it... am I imagining it or is there another reason why she hates the Enclave?

AWWWW *virtual hugs back*

oh no... they aren't making a MR movie... HOW DARE THEY!

JOSEPHINE IS GOING TO GET HURT? fknwskfnvkjwbenhjfsnbcalksa (I just went insane there for a sec...)

I agree with your friend. Very bad vibes from her.

LINDY IS A SPY?

JOSEPHINE ! Are you purposefully torturing me?

HAHA THE GUARDS WERE OFF-GUARD!

Lindy is very suspiscious...

I agree with Leon. Gaia was being reckless and stupid...

GAIA WHY YOU SO STUPID! DON'T GO ALONE! AT LEAST GO WITH LEON (dreamy Leon *sigh*)

I s'm still mad at you okay? You don't kill Norris, okay? He's awesome... you... you just don't okay? *mutters to self* "He's still alive. norris is just sleeping. He didn't die." (I'm insane aren't i? O.o)

I have already gone crazy waiting for Promised. (If you couldn't tell from my name XD)

NOO WHY WOULD YOU KILL NORRIS! *cries* I LOVED HIM! /3