Good story can't wait to read more n see how things go between Gwen an Dave

Please write more! I really like this story. This chapter was so sad I was nearly in tears! You are a wonderful writer! :)

I really like your story. But when you change points of view, could you have something to separate them like a symbol or something? It will help find out who's who faster. I hope this will be of help. This is a great story.

This story is going so good, I love it, please continue :)