good ending, i like how you wrote kira

thanx for updating! I liked this chapter.

Great ending! I really enjoyed this story even though it was horribly sad )

Nice chapter, you gave him that ray of hope back there when introducing Kira! Nice end to a wonderful story!

very very sad, hope you update soon!

AW another sad chapter, but great as always. Poor Mencheres (

Good chapter it made me cry

Awww how sad. I had a bad feeling about that relationship from the start, but I didn't think it would turn out THAT bad. Poor Mencheres :( But really, he shoudln't have trusted her. But I guess love can make even Mencheres act stupid for a change, I wonder if he will recover from this...

Hi I just wanted to say that this is a great story. This chapter especially, it made me cry it was so sad!

Oh my god, she played him all this time? I just can't believe it! How can you be so mean? lol! But your extremely good at it so I forgive you! Great chapter!

Oh nooooo poor Mencheres :( I feared something was up, but i never imagined it would be this bad. I feel so sorry for him. Patra is a horrible horrible person! But having that said, the chapter was amazing, very well written I could almost feel his pain

Why doesn't she want him to hold her? that surely is suspicious if she had loved him the way he thinks she does, I believe she would have wanted that. Can't wait to find out what's up with her!

nice update

ok, so that's not good, mencheres realizing he can't live without her again. that's actually really bad, isn't it? or are you really going for a happily ever after for them?

Great so far! Hope you update soon