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| Reviews for Consuming Direct Control |
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   voidblade6 8/13/12 . chapter 14Oh shit that was crazy. Though I think cause kasumi is japaneze she might have enjoyed tentacle time with him. :) |
| voidblade6 8/13/12 . chapter 9 They call it nuke launcher in game |
| voidblade6 8/13/12 . chapter 5 If you hate him you should screw up the mission then. or better yet wait til the suicide mission is done then screw up the mission. |
| voidblade6 8/13/12 . chapter 4 Joker just snorted. "Honestly, Commander? The guy freaks me the hell out. He just… stands there. Watching. Like he's trying to decide the best way to kill you and eat your brains or something. Nice sense of humor, though. It's buried beneath a mile of brooding and scowling, but it's there." Ha joker hit it right on the spot. |
| chidoriprime 8/13/12 . chapter 18 Wow. Powerful stuff, I tell you. Good job. Memento mori. |
| Deicidestar0084 8/13/12 . chapter 19 I have to say that I very rarely find a fanfic that keeps my attention and giggling like a little girl as this one has! At first I was very leery on reading something that combined two different games into one fanfic, but I am very proud to say you pulled it off beautifully! I keep finding myself laughing at the easter eggs that you placed in this. I'm now at chapter 19 ( I started reading this 4:30am and it is now 8:39am. ) I nearly died when I read the "That only counts as one!" and the "No respect. No respect at all". How every now and then as some humor you have mercer end up with half face is priceless. Then how you are slowly having Mercer change to were he doesn't want to kill Shepard 95.0% of the time. Can't wait to read more! |
| NA 8/10/12 . chapter 4 EDI and Joker perfectley pulled of at least in y opinion |
| kyuubi 1920 8/10/12 . chapter 44 awsome soooo needs to continue possible ton alx mercer fanfics ever |
| cakemaster 8/8/12 . chapter 44 Hope you continue it some day. Just in case putting you on follow :D |
| BlazaWolf 8/7/12 . chapter 43 You're one of my favorite authors now, just for this one story. I hope your novel that you're talking about in the next chapter gets published |
| chidoriprime 8/7/12 . chapter 12 If this is how the Justicar treat Alex, I'd hate to see how they would react to James Heller, considering he's WAY stronger than Alex. |
| chidoriprime 8/7/12 . chapter 7 Alex Crime Lords St. Valntine's Day Massacure |
| BlazaWolf 8/7/12 . chapter 33 That last line sent me into a bit of a giggle fit. |
| BlazaWolf 8/7/12 . chapter 25 YES, purple, fucking yes. Purple is my favorite color too. |
| seth motley 8/5/12 . chapter 44 great story |
