Alex seriosly didn't see through jokers lie?

I hope you find success with Reign of Shadows. it will be a bit boring without this fic but it will simply build until the next parts are begun. Thank you for the wonderful read, I hope you can get back to it and show us the glory of a true MEPrototype Fan Fiction.

Alright, first off I'm blown away at how well you're pulling off Alex's character. Most other ficts I've read concerning him turn him into an emo softy with no level of predatory intent like he should have. i am honestly enjoying every chapter, just wish they were a bit longer. now for a suggestion. Have you ever considered this, A PrototypeDark SectorMass Effect fict? The way you've molded the world of mass effect to incorporate Alex would work well with the Dark sector protagonist (sorry his name escapes me at the moment) because of similar qualities between their powers. Alex is destruction, Dark Sector is stealth and elegence in combat.

and the other crewman how could you why not biojelly or whatever its called

Ahh, look at Alex all proud and emotional. It's unexpected but actually pretty funny to read. 10/10

This story is amazing. How amazing? It has it's own well done fan art.

I would've though the Ryncol did that to Alex because he's a virus. Bacteria. The pure alcohol of Ryncol, whose effects are mentioned a lot in the games, would have little trouble destroying a bacteria. But that'd just my take on it

Well, actually... I figure getting hit by a dreadnought main caliber gun during orbital bombardment may qualify. Depends on how Alex chose to live for those two centuries, like whether he was on Shanxi during First Contact War or not.

What I want to know much more is the end result of Alex/Morinth melding. I'm already cackling in anticipation!

Egads! Snickering all the way in! :D

Kasumi wins major cookies for this one! Nothing tickles funny bone as much as making someone grumpy socialise!

I eagerly await Mercer's loyalty mission. I'd really like to see what you cook up.

Wow this fic is way epic and brilliant. cant what for you to start up ME3 Arc. My hand reaches through the dark abyss waiting for you... and the update.:) oh and nice idea for a biomechanical/reaper Alex. brownie points!

It's been eight months and I still stare at my alerts page at times, hoping wistfully for an update. This is one of my top two favorite fics for the Prototype fandom, not that there's much competition... but seriously. I think I completely reread this maybe five times since it went on hiatus. I wish you luck on your ventures as a real author, but please don't forget your faithful readers! Take all the time you need, but I hope you can return within a year or two of your initial hiatus.

I hope you are successful in your endevor into real author-hood! Certainly this story entertained my attention enough to read it all within one day...

And yea, you probably won't read this ever, but I feel inclined to point out the pure (logically) hypocritical, ironic-ness, of your 'morals'! xD Saying the F-word is a giant no-no, but implied tentacle-rape? Totally okay. xD (And if you are reading this and feel insulted, sorry, I just thought it was amusing...)

Anyhow, cheers!

-Ran ;D

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