Really liked it especially the part about the sneeze !

I like this one, its funny hahahaha

perfect at all levels!

I like this :)

It was simultaneously sweet and funny and ... just moving. I can't pinpoint what exactly it is about this fic that's moving, but there's just something about the insight into Tony's thoughts ... lol.

I really like the gigglefest; it's hilarious. And the scene in the morning, lol! Poor Tony, being harassed by three women :P

Thank you for sharing!

Soph

Wow this was so great:) I especially love the last line! I laughed out loud. And the laundry detergent thing? Great! This was SO incharacter! Amazing job, really!

Good one!

Wonderfully done! Fits the mood of the episode and where Tony and Ziva are in their story now. Looooved it! :)

hehe, I heard about the "arepa" double meaning xD Awesome story. Ty for sharing!

I absolutely loved this. The sense of warmth and understanding between Tony and Ziva was beautifully expressed and you've caught both of their characters perfectly. I also thought it was very well written generally, it flowed really nicely and I could very easily picture the scenes in my head. Much much love 3

Wonderfully written! You had me laughing out loud at more than one point :) Thankyou

I'm looking forward to reading more from you ;))

I really Like that! Well done!

I'd love to read more of your stories :)

This was adorable! So cute! Well done :)

A wonderful debut to FFnet. Congratulations!

I wasn't aware of arepa as slang, and so - oh my! - Tony's earlier (canon) remark to Monique now takes on a whole new meaning (and, oh god, the smile that accompanied it)!

I hope this is your first of many forays into the lives of our favourite special agents. :)