|Reviews for Unfolding|
| Ladyaloysius 5/13/13 . chapter 1
Really liked it especially the part about the sneeze !
| K3IR 10/4/12 . chapter 1
I like this one, its funny hahahaha
| KYTIVAFAN 5/29/12 . chapter 1
perfect at all levels!
| Anonymous033 5/23/12 . chapter 1
I like this :)
It was simultaneously sweet and funny and ... just moving. I can't pinpoint what exactly it is about this fic that's moving, but there's just something about the insight into Tony's thoughts ... lol.
I really like the gigglefest; it's hilarious. And the scene in the morning, lol! Poor Tony, being harassed by three women :P
Thank you for sharing!
| ForeignMusicLyrics 5/2/12 . chapter 1
Wow this was so great:) I especially love the last line! I laughed out loud. And the laundry detergent thing? Great! This was SO incharacter! Amazing job, really!
| gibbsgirlie08 4/30/12 . chapter 1
| brightblue 4/28/12 . chapter 1
Wonderfully done! Fits the mood of the episode and where Tony and Ziva are in their story now. Looooved it! :)
| Leah339 4/28/12 . chapter 1
hehe, I heard about the "arepa" double meaning xD Awesome story. Ty for sharing!
| sophiepotato 4/28/12 . chapter 1
I absolutely loved this. The sense of warmth and understanding between Tony and Ziva was beautifully expressed and you've caught both of their characters perfectly. I also thought it was very well written generally, it flowed really nicely and I could very easily picture the scenes in my head. Much much love 3
| Paperclip-Assassin 4/27/12 . chapter 1
Wonderfully written! You had me laughing out loud at more than one point :) Thankyou
I'm looking forward to reading more from you ;))
| Courtzylovesit 4/27/12 . chapter 1
I really Like that! Well done!
I'd love to read more of your stories :)
| ThereIsAlwaysAnotherMonster 4/27/12 . chapter 1
This was adorable! So cute! Well done :)
| Schmaltzy 4/27/12 . chapter 1
A wonderful debut to FFnet. Congratulations!
I wasn't aware of arepa as slang, and so - oh my! - Tony's earlier (canon) remark to Monique now takes on a whole new meaning (and, oh god, the smile that accompanied it)!
I hope this is your first of many forays into the lives of our favourite special agents. :)