I really like your opening chapter . It's all nice and cozy. *flails around* I really like it. I don't normally read final fantasy fanfics and this one so far is making me wanna read more of them

please continue

that is getting funnier

ohhh man that was funny

awwww that was awesome hope got some nasty magic now :)

intresting never thought of dimensatial stuff lol

love this story can't wait until you update

Ok one, Ilove this story, and two I see little to no mistakes sooo good for you:) and three, plz update soon, things are getting interesting.

Needs more XIII elements such as Libra to "feel" the information, more fire, ice, wind, water, earth (quake) and paradigm shift(?); but stick him with ravager, synergist ,medic and magic related abilities (remember he is physically squishy for a L'cie).

Can't wait to see what and enraged inner Moka will do with haste and bravery.

Its been a while since you last updated this story, I hope that you're doing alright and nothing bad has happened. Poor Kurumu, getting slapped in the face like that; at least she's still ready and willing like most of the group to fight for their rights and bring down the corrupt the so called "Public Safety Committee." Too bad that Snow, Lightning and Fang can't pay a visit to the school and help the Newspaper club kick its butt; that would be so entertaining. I like that all of these events are helping Hope to toughen up so that he'll eventually be strong and confident enough to protect himself and those he cares about without help from his friends back home; Lightning would be so proud of him and happy to see her little Hope growing up bit by bit. Perhaps she can even rub that in Snow's face by telling him to act more like Hope (laughes), Serah would be happy for Hope as well; at least until the time comes when he and all of his new female friends visit him back at home (laughes).

Nice! Please update more!

I love this story! You did hope's character justice in this one. Normally I hate hope, because he's such a whiny brat, but now he's different. I guess he has to be, alright. XD please update soon!

Ah, another well done chapter. Can't wait for more of it! And welcome back senpai!

Awesome! Glad that you're back! Chapter may be shorter than usual and you skipped the detail with ishigami in it, but building it up to this point is simply amazing! Please post sooner and keep it up! See you soon!

Interesting. Update soon! :)