A nice little story, it could be expanded on.

Hi!
I liked your short story very much, I think you could develop it better, e.g., showing us where which country Damien was when he found Gabi, how she left her father, if she had a mother, etc. You see, I don't know if Gabi was blonde, brunette or redhaired, etc.
But it is a very good story, Frankenstein had been one of my favorites for decades.
Congratulations!

great story!

Very good story! There are a few spelling mistakes, but overall great. I've always felt bad for the Frankenstein Monster. I believe that if he had even just one friend, he wouldn't have become bad.

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