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   Heyitsm 5/19/12 . chapter 1I'm having trouble following this story. in the books, Cato is a brutal career who Katniss kills, California and texas no longer exist, her mom cannot work, there are no hunger games in this story, you cannot move to different places, they are far too poor to afford for her to go to private school, private schools do not exist in district 12, and Katniss has the survival on her mind, not moody teenage girl problems. It doesn't really make sense to be honest. Don't get me wrong, this is an amazing piece of literature and you are an excellent author, its just a little difficult to follow, and I can't really seem to find anything that connects it to the original book series apart from the name. Good luck, and happy writing heyitsm |
| girlonfire5360 5/19/12 . chapter 12 Great chapter update soon :) |
| LiveLaughHungerGames333 5/17/12 . chapter 11 love Love LOVE this story! Cato and Katniss are so cute together! Katniss leaving was so sad I actually cried. I know pathetic but it's true. Anyways update soon! I can't wait to see the reunion! |
| Mandie12341 5/17/12 . chapter 11 You have a really great story and I can't wait to read more, good job! |
| thepinkmartini 5/16/12 . chapter 11 Great chapter! I loved Cato's pov! |
| FanFictionUser123789 5/16/12 . chapter 11 What reunion? Cato and Katniss? YEEPEE! :D Anyways... please update fast! |
| scoco 5/16/12 . chapter 11 absence makes the heart grow fonder, am i right? so i can't wait for the reunion! :D |
| Brike99 5/16/12 . chapter 11 Awesome story. I like how you brought Johanna into the story. Please update soon |
| Mocking Verse 5/16/12 . chapter 11 Once again, great chapter! I love how Johanna's in here too ;) update soon! |
| geranium08 5/16/12 . chapter 11 I'm just glad she is sure on seeing him again! I hope they don't meet other people! Update soon. |
| RosygV 5/16/12 . chapter 11 I liked this chapter. Update sooon |
| DedicatedWallflower 5/16/12 . chapter 11 Oh my gosh must you do this to me? I'm going to literally die if I have to wait til Sunday :) possibly the best au Cato Katniss ever writteb |
| My.Wings.Have.Fallen 5/16/12 . chapter 10 i wasn't expecting that. Please update soon! |
| Francesca Mellark 5/15/12 . chapter 10 I really hope Katniss and Cato get together soon! I think that they make the cutest couple ever, just saying. Also, I think this is an amazing piece of writing. Keep moving forward. It would be nice to include texts between both Cato and Katniss to signify that they still want to be with eachother even though they are seperated by location. Thanks for the imagery and creative tentions between the characters. Update soon! |
| thepinkmartini 5/15/12 . chapter 10 That was so unexpected! |
