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heartoftheword
2008-06-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseARRGGH! Poor ryou chan!
Erin N.
2007-07-16
ch 15, anon.
abuseYAYY!! BAKURA'S BACK!
I swear, I'm gonna marry that guy.
O.O
2007-03-09
ch 15, anon.
abuseI probably should comment on your story rather than your author's note (thing) but that's funny with the fake eyes and all! (you probably have no idea what I'm talking about...
Isaya831
2007-01-31
ch 1,
abuseI found this story a long time ago on Kokoro no Naka. I have to admit, about a hundred fanfics later this one's still my favorite.
Youko's Kitsune Girl
2006-12-22
ch 15,
abuse*Blushes slightly* Eeh...I thought Ryou was really gone for a minute... ^^; *Puts away all weapons of mass destruction* :)
I'm very releived that Ryou got out of this alive!! :D *Dances around merrily*
Ryou: *Watches with an embarassed look on his face* ...
*Hugs Ryou* YOU'RE ALIVE! XD I'm soo happy!!
Great story. It was very well written(Which makes it A LOT more enjoyable to read! lol)
Youko's Kitsune Girl
2006-12-22
ch 14,
abuse*Shrieks loudly* NO! RYOU! *Begins sobbing uncontrolably*
Ryou:..at least I'm free from Bakura now. *Smiles softly*
I...*Sniff*...know, and that's good...*Sobs* But...*Huggles Ryou* OH GOD, I'LL MISS YOU! YOU DIED WITH SUCH BRAVERY!! *Seeths* I will kill whoever claimed you as weak!! *GLARE*
Ryou: ^^; *Nervous chuckle* In that case...the worlds population is about to drop rapidly.
Youko's Kitsune Girl
2006-12-22
ch 10,
abuselol!! Malik is so mean!! :O
I can trust all your little side convos to break me out of my depression after I read each chapter...*Sniffles patheticly*
Youko's Kitsune Girl
2006-12-22
ch 6,
abuse*Sighs* That's sad. I'm glad that Yugi is steppn' in though! ;D lol. I have a quick question!
Do you write BakuraxRyou pairing stories?? Is this turning into one of those?? :P Sorry I'm asking, just, that one part when Bakura instinctivly caught Ryou made me think of fluff or somthing...(oops..sorry, that was two questions lol)
Well...if it does happen to roll into that, then cool! :D "Ryous Lil' Tenshi" just got me into RyouxBakura stories, and she suggested you to me. ^_^ So..I'm just wondering lol. :P
On with the story!! *Clicks arrow*
Youko's Kitsune Girl
2006-12-22
ch 3,
abuse*Growls* Bakuras such a selfish bastard! -_- Poor Ryou...:( This story seems fairly interesting so far...:P So I'll just keep on reading!! ^_^
My only suggestion is to, if you can, in future stories make the chapters a little longer. :)
C.B.A
2006-11-09
ch 15,
abuseI know this story is probably really, really, old, but I came across this randomly and once I started reading this, I read the whole dame thing b/c it was so awesome. (which is QUITE apparant judging from the reviews) Anyway, this was such a great story and I think what made this story so amazing is the fact that everyone was so in character, the plotline was believable. Aw, but I felt so sorry for Bakura it totally dampened my mood! (and now I'll be unable to do my homework! Damn, I just needed a break from it and now I end up spending a couple hours reading this!) Also, the whole writer's block scenes before the story was a great idea to provide people with some comic relief. Plus the ending comic scene w/ Yami Bakura and Bakura made me feel better when their eyes were perfectly okay, lol. :) Anyway, great, great, great (x10) job with this! It's just too bad I don't have the time right now to read the rest of your stories! But I probably will soon b/c now I'm totally hooked to your work!
Kume-Angel of Re
2006-08-12
ch 15,
abuseHumph. Bakura's dead...on the OTHER hand, Ryou's ALIVE. But I'm glad there's a sequel all the same...^^;
your mother
2006-05-22
ch 15, anon.
abuseawesome.
Wish-full Thinker
2006-01-12
ch 15,
abuseNo! Good guys won!

Nicely written though. And there's still the sequel...
Wish-full Thinker
2006-01-12
ch 9,
abuseI like it very muuch so far. Is Bakura *that* abusive in the anime/manga?...Doesn't matter, you make the story so convinging I now think he is.

I love your A/Ns!
Wish-full Thinker
2006-01-12
ch 6,
abuseEW...Good story. I like the way you described the eye. I can't wait to see where this story is leading!

EW...
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