oahh, that was sad! RYOU! D: *sob*
ahwwah, this is an ah-mazing storyy.
i know it's old but it's awesomee. <3

Good job.

Awesome!

This is really good. Sorry for not reviewing the other chapters, but I've been too caught up in the story. And it'll probably be the same way with the next one.

ARRGGH! Poor ryou chan!

YAYY!! BAKURA'S BACK!
I swear, I'm gonna marry that guy.

I probably should comment on your story rather than your author's note (thing) but that's funny with the fake eyes and all! (you probably have no idea what I'm talking about...

I found this story a long time ago on Kokoro no Naka. I have to admit, about a hundred fanfics later this one's still my favorite.

*Blushes slightly* Eeh...I thought Ryou was really gone for a minute... ^^; *Puts away all weapons of mass destruction* :)
I'm very releived that Ryou got out of this alive!! :D *Dances around merrily*
Ryou: *Watches with an embarassed look on his face* ...
*Hugs Ryou* YOU'RE ALIVE! XD I'm soo happy!!
Great story. It was very well written(Which makes it A LOT more enjoyable to read! lol)

*Shrieks loudly* NO! RYOU! *Begins sobbing uncontrolably*
Ryou:..at least I'm free from Bakura now. *Smiles softly*
I...*Sniff*...know, and that's good...*Sobs* But...*Huggles Ryou* OH GOD, I'LL MISS YOU! YOU DIED WITH SUCH BRAVERY!! *Seeths* I will kill whoever claimed you as weak!! *GLARE*
Ryou: ^^; *Nervous chuckle* In that case...the worlds population is about to drop rapidly.

lol!! Malik is so mean!! :O
I can trust all your little side convos to break me out of my depression after I read each chapter...*Sniffles patheticly*

*Sighs* That's sad. I'm glad that Yugi is steppn' in though! ;D lol. I have a quick question!
Do you write BakuraxRyou pairing stories?? Is this turning into one of those?? :P Sorry I'm asking, just, that one part when Bakura instinctivly caught Ryou made me think of fluff or somthing...(oops..sorry, that was two questions lol)
Well...if it does happen to roll into that, then cool! :D "Ryous Lil' Tenshi" just got me into RyouxBakura stories, and she suggested you to me. ^_^ So..I'm just wondering lol. :P
On with the story!! *Clicks arrow*

*Growls* Bakuras such a selfish bastard! -_- Poor Ryou...:( This story seems fairly interesting so far...:P So I'll just keep on reading!! ^_^
My only suggestion is to, if you can, in future stories make the chapters a little longer. :)

I know this story is probably really, really, old, but I came across this randomly and once I started reading this, I read the whole dame thing b/c it was so awesome. (which is QUITE apparant judging from the reviews) Anyway, this was such a great story and I think what made this story so amazing is the fact that everyone was so in character, the plotline was believable. Aw, but I felt so sorry for Bakura it totally dampened my mood! (and now I'll be unable to do my homework! Damn, I just needed a break from it and now I end up spending a couple hours reading this!) Also, the whole writer's block scenes before the story was a great idea to provide people with some comic relief. Plus the ending comic scene w/ Yami Bakura and Bakura made me feel better when their eyes were perfectly okay, lol. :) Anyway, great, great, great (x10) job with this! It's just too bad I don't have the time right now to read the rest of your stories! But I probably will soon b/c now I'm totally hooked to your work!

Humph. Bakura's dead...on the OTHER hand, Ryou's ALIVE. But I'm glad there's a sequel all the same...^^;