Sequel?

Good chapter :) :)

Oh, Deeks, that was mean! LOL worthy, though.

Haha, great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!(:

I really love this cliff hanger of sorts!

Liking this story :)

First off, thanks so much for reading my stories. I'm glad you like them. Secondly, congrats on writing your first story. I've been writing since I was six years old, and I know how hard it is to put yourself out there for the first time. I think it's a good start, and Deeks is very much in character. I like that he doesn't want to take advantage of Kensi while she's drunk. I also like the very real side of him that's totally male, and excited over her attention. Kensi seems out of character to me, but if she's annihilated, she wouldn't be herself, and since we've never seen her drunk on the show, we have no clear idea how she would act. So, that's open to however you want to imagine her character would behave. You have a few spelling/grammar issues, but they're easily mitigated and easily overlooked, and they didn't affect the story at all. I'd up the rating to T for safety, just because of the sexual energy, and wherever it might lead. If things get too heated in a future chapter, rate that one M, or rate the whole story M to cover your butt, so to speak.

This is a very fun story! I love it,keep up the great work!

Very nice story, I do reckon you should up the rating to T though :) it's a teeny bit out of character at parts but that is prefectly fine, it's your first fanfic and it's very good for that :)

-LJ x

woho can't wait for more :)

awesomee keep this up. be sure to check out my ff. FAMILIA AETERNUM

poor kensi she's going to regret a few things in the morning id she dont kill him in the process...love the story

Great start especially for a first fic!

Good story :) (not sure it's K though, not that I care)

KEEP WRITING! Such a fun story! Can't wait for more!:))