|Reviews for War of the West|
| ChocolateTeapot 8/23/12 . chapter 3
Another great chapter. The description of the barbarian border was awesome, it really set the scene. I really like the last two paragraphs too, particularly the narrator's realisation that he has made a mistake.
| ChocolateTeapot 5/9/12 . chapter 2
Great chapter! Wen Tao also seems like a very intriguing character. The details are really good and give the story a feeling of place.
| ChocolateTeapot 4/29/12 . chapter 1
Great work! The dialogue sounds right and I really like the atmosphere. Both Francois and Alexandre seem like very interesting characters. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!