It is good even though it isnt what i excpected.

thanks for reviewing. im making a new chapter right now

I was so excited for Audrey Wait! You really let me down...

This seems like an interesting idea. With some polishing (mostly checking grammar, spelling and punctuation plus some expansion in regards to detail) this could be a wonderful idea.

However, since this isn't fanfiction, I would recommend you post this to FanFictiondotNet's sister site, FictionPress.

Good story update soon