Muy bueno

Sequel, sequel, sequel!

Just if you were intested, Sherlock Holmes' middle name is Scott in a book set I'm reading, based heavily on ACD's work, but I'm not sure about ACD's Holmes.

Amazing story! I had some alert problems and completely MISSED everything till the last chapter post, so I read it quick and here we are at the end. Huh, awesome.

Ta

I notice how John's initials at the end of his text were JH, are they married?x

I'm laughing so hard I almost chocked on my tea! Well done you!

Ta

I just wanted to point out that when John is texting Mycroft you wrote JH for his initials. I'm not sure if that was intentional or not. /

I really am enjoying this story. I love the Johnlock part and I love how you brought back the study in pink. I was guessing that Mycroft was Isabell's father and there was one point when I thought that Sarah was the poisoner, so I'm constantly surprised. I never would have guessed that Aaliyah and Moriarty are the parents.

One question, though: How old is everyone? Specifically, how old was Aaliyah when she had Mycroft and when she had Isabell? She must have been pretty young with Mycroft and pretty old with Isabell. That's why I originally discounted her. I asumed she was too old to be the mother of Isabell.

This is such a good story! Your plot is original, the dialogue is smart and funny, and you kept true to the characters' personalities while really making them your own. I have read many, many Sherlock/John stories, and yours was one of the few that had me on the edge of my seat, waiting for them to kiss. I loved the touch of making Moriarty the father. Brilliant! My only criticism would be grammar. To a Grammar Nazi like myself, it seems to stick out and reduce the quality of your writing. Do you have a Beta yet? I haven't been on long enough to do it officially, but if you are interested, I would be willing to help you. This story has a lot of potential! Think about it, and message me.

Monica Q

Ey there mate, good chapter but I do not think I will be reading this anymore friend. Sherlock is too ooc (out of character) for me to stomach. The fact that Izzy's father is Moriarty is irrelevant, in fact a good plot point, but I cannot stand Sherlock acting like a normal person. He isn't one, even if he does have emotions and cares about certain people. Keep up the good work though for I am sure other people enjoy this.

Cheers

Alex

Wow, I'm really enjoing your fic, it great! Please update soon its been too long! Please?

"He had done a lot of dirty things in his day but this took the cake."

Cake, lol XD

This is still pretty amazing, and very cute. Only a couple of things my friend. Sherlock (while understandable that he is a bit more humanized) is a tad too out of Character. Not noticing John was a bitter? He would have known that and more. That is my interpretation of Sherlock according to the TV show, but once more you do not have to change anything! Keep up the good work!

Cheers

Alex

Great story.

So,Baby Isabell-where did she really come from and why has Mycroft made sure that Sherlock and John are her parents?

How do Sherlock and John feel about becoming parents? Can john cope with a baby and Sherlock?

Can't wait to see what happens next

Hello,

I like this story more and more :) nice idea (though a little bit ooc sometime - that wasn't a complaint! I think you had a few 'typo' in this chapter - no I'm not commenting just to point them out, I comment to tell you that I love your story! The typos were just little confusing: you wrote John, instead of Sherlock once in the last scene ('John said handing the bottle back') and you wrote that Sherlock was native... I guess this wanted to be naive :D This really is not to make you feel bad or whatever, I know the feeling when you don't find typos in your text, because you know what should be there :)

Really looking forward to the next chapter!