your sooooo mean with your cliffhangers... Fantastic story

I wonder what Kris is up to now? Aww, Sabrina's obsession with marshmallows is so adorable _

O_O Kris got shot! I'm wondering how Kelly and Sabrina will explain to Jill what's going on...

Glad to see things are somewhat normal, which makes me wonder what's in store for the girls.

I bet this time Kris actually dies. We don't know much about her anyway, but I never really liked her _

Okay, I'm gonna betaread the next chapter then send all 10 to you :)

Haha, stubborn Sabrina :P as always. Hmm, I wonder what'll happen next

She's alive! YAY! But still in danger... I wonder how Charlie/John are related to the bad guys? What sort of connection? O_o this is really heating up, haha

You. Killed. Sabrina! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO D: she was my favourite character! O_O

I blame Kris! I don't even like her . please, no more killing good characters? :( great chapter though. Damn you, John Lawson!

It's building up now :O Who's Lawson, and what does he have to do with Kris? I smell a conspiracy XD

YOU DID NOT JUST KILL SABRINA. YOU DID NOT...

Did you? :O

I hope we get to see more of Sabrina's backstory :p and yes, I'm waiting for the action too XD

I have the feeling something big is going to happen O_o I wonder what Jill's family are like?

I think Sabrina will take the job ;] she needs it, after all

Interesting story but there is still a few loose ends. Or is there a sequel?

Love the story ... Am waiting to read more from you in the future.

Nice. you made me smile. I look forward to more of y our stories.