|Reviews for Try it again?|
| guategal 7/18/12 . chapter 1
I loved your plot development to this happy ending. I appreciate so much your efforts to share this in English so I might enjoy your creativity. Thank you.
| willicia 5/10/12 . chapter 1
"I will show you that not everyone is going to break your heart. I will treat you like you have always deserved. I will never hurt you like Peter did, Licia. I promise." - this is perfection. please write more.
| anna 4/30/12 . chapter 1
one of my favorite stories! thank you for writing !
| guategal 4/29/12 . chapter 1
Thanks for writing. What a lovely dialogue Between Alicia and her kids. How nicely you tied things together for A/W to enjoy their relationship again. Well done.
| Guest 4/29/12 . chapter 1
Love it , good work !
| AD29 4/29/12 . chapter 1
"Do you promise me something?", she whispered. "Everything." "No cheating,ok?" "I will show you that not everyone is going to break your heart. I will treat you like you have always deserved. I will never hurt you like Peter did, Licia. I promise." Will kissed her softly on the lips and she brought her hand to his face, touched his cheeks, brushing it with her fingers. "I know we can make this last.", Alicia said. "I love you", he whispered, so quietly, she hardly understand it. He said it more to himself than to her. Just wanted to say it, finally. She wanted to answer "I know.", but then she remembered the last time Peter said those three words to her and she answered "I know" back then. So she looked at Will, his boyfriend? She smiled because of that thought. Will, her Will! And so she said the truth, "I love you too."-Such an adorable oneshot, and I especially loved this part!
| Bacalao 4/29/12 . chapter 1
Schön noch einen Schreiberling aus Deutschland zu haben!
Ich mag Deine Geschichte, der einzige Kritikpunkt wäre das Format, es ist schwer zu lesen wenn Du wörtliche Rede von mehreren Personen in eine Zeile setzt, man verliert dann schon mal etwas den Überblick und muss wieder von vorn starten macht es schwerer in die Geschichte einzutauchen und das ist einfach schade, weil es ist eine nette Story.
Mal sehen was das Staffelende heute Abend bringt und welche neuen Ideen!
Viele Grüße und ich hoffe Dich hier wieder zu lesen!