great story love that you are still writing TOS BSG. It so made my day to find this in my box.

Thanks

Fire

Nicely done.

Very nicely done! As a fan of the old Battlestar Galactica series, I could hear the original characters' (Lloyd Bridges as Cain and Anne Lockhart as Sheba, with Jane Seymour as Serena giving the news coverage) voices reciting the dialog you've so wonderfully written...very nice tie-in with Cain's frustration with Adama...and love the "How could it end like this, old friend?"-that was so Cain. Very well done! :)

Robert