|Reviews for Well She Seemed Normal|
| TopazDragon 7/30/12 . chapter 6
Haha, long reviews are aplenty when the story is good. Now, I must apologize for my absence and, thus, missing out on this fic for a bit.
I had so been looking forward to your fics even up in the mountains where reception is null and I could just forget about internet connections.
You're reaffirming my love in Duo/Ami. I could just see the two as you show them. Duo is a witty guy, most seem to forget that since he is considered a not-so-serious-guy when, as you have shown, he can be serious about important matters and can veil his true thoughts easily. And the conversation between the two just had me laughing up a storm. Both can be stubborn and I could easily see it in this case.
Yes! I was very excited to see Hotaru and the royal couple. I was eager to see Usagi and Mamoru ever since that one chapter where it is mentioned that Makoto found something odd happening between the two. Now, I'm just dying with curiosity to see what happened between them? And I have to agree with Hotaru. Those two were like the ultimate love story! No vampires needed! Or emoing, dull girls with submissive/suicidal tendencies. Is it the strain of a world they never knew of? Was this before they all woke up into this new world? And what is the vacation for? Especially with Hotaru. Or was she placed there to keep watch on the royal couple?
So many questions that has this eager reader wiggling in her seat to know more. I can't wait for the others to see what else is unraveled.
| Guest 7/26/12 . chapter 5
Woot woot! I'm really getting into this story! Update soon!
| Nerf-or-Nothing 6/13/12 . chapter 5
YEY! An update! this makes me happy!
I've been gone a while, because I've smashed my cheating exes laptop when I caught him being stupid for the last time. Sadly, no PC for me now and I must resort to the Library till I can afford one of my own.
Damn jerk was an idiot on my birthday no less. MURDER! I FEEL LIKE COMMITTING MURDER! but after reading this lovely piece of work, I feel better because great writing always cheers me up, even when it's suspenseful and dramatic!
Hope to see more updates soon. It takes me awhile to get online now that I have to commute but when I do, you have a review waiting with your name on it... well technically my name but any who it's just for you. A RHYME! Me equals strange. I know.
PS I've cataloged your stories under my genre of EPIC!
| lily 6/3/12 . chapter 5
loved heero/rei! you're a great writer & i love your descriptions. :)
| TopazDragon 5/28/12 . chapter 5
I was the one bouncing for joy, seeing an update on this! Again, you're an inspiration and have given me a boost of writing creativity.
This chapter was fun, especially as we get to see more of Rei interacting, her thoughts on this new time and we see a litte bit more of the Rei we know and love. She's never been a people person, so I think you've gotten her character perfectly when she viewed the ball as unwanted. She did recieve a nice little surprise with Heero, didn't she though? -Wink wink, nudge, nudge-
Ahh, so that is the reason why Minako's been placed there. Along with added spying inside the Preventers. Hehehe.
I can understand that. I am curious about the cryo sleep and what brought that along for our Senshi, Princess and Mamoru. Speaking of, where are the royal couple? If they're still a couple that is.
But alas, it is true. The group would want to know what had happened, what new world they had been awakened in, along with what had happened in the past to their families and such. It would be a hard topic to not want closure on.
No, the sad parts aren't annoying. I feel they fit perfectly, especially when you take into account what the girls and Mamo must be going through. So, you're doing wonderful job, dear, all around.
The speed of it is good to me. It's not too fast and not too slow. It adds a sense of suspense to the peice. With this new enemy, and two untrusting allies, it makes for a juicy peice.
I'm looking froward to Rei meeting with Relena, I can only imagine what Heero's face might look like behind his mask once he comes and plays bodyguard to the meeting. Much less what he may do afterwards with it. ;)
Aww, you're making me blush. Thank you, very much. You're an amazing writer as well and I look forward to your work.
No problem, as I am always happy to let a writer know about their peice, good or bad. And I have nothing but good to say about your writing.
You're amazing with description and grammar. You paint actions and feelings in the words that it always seems to feel like poetic waves.
I see to be leaving amazingly long reviews lately, which I am uber happy about. Thank you again, dear! And keep up the awesome writing!
| TopazDragon 5/23/12 . chapter 4
You can't imagine how eager I have been for your updates. You have all these amazing stories that are filled with suspense, mystery, drama, and all the fun stuff that makes readers keep coming back for more.
Poor Makoto, I can see that something did not end well with Motoki. And I feel for her, especially as she is on a plane and the situation was certainly not getting better for her all around. Hmm, I wonder if that was Trowa she had bumped into on the plane?
Ed (Duo) and Ami's interactions are mature and fun. It almost has that feel of 'How Harry Met Sally' bit. Like Sally tolerating Harry, yet they both have that underlying theme of sexual tension. Giving advice on their respective sexes and blowing the other's mind with the underlying, dirty truths.
Yes, you're chapters are a bit shorter than I am use to, but I think that it works for this type of fic. You want the audience to be on their toes and guessing and with these little flashes into what is happening it certainly does leave the readers curious and wondering why.
Haha, I can understand not wanting to rush things. The plot plays out much more easily that way and you've always done a magnificient job in doing so.
-Blushes- No, thank you. I honestly get inspired every time I read awesome fics, especially all the ones we see popping up and around. Like you said, so much inspiration around.
Thank you, dear. I am eager and wondering where we shall go next. I do find the comment aout Mamoru and Usagi's relationship curious, wondering if that means there love has deepened or something else. I hope Ami gets well soon! I look forward on seeing what Duo will find, where Makoto and Haruka are going, and basically all the goings on between the players of this new scene.
Keep up the awesome writing!
| TopazDragon 5/9/12 . chapter 3
Where the flip have I been? I hop on to discover this new story, well-written adn just as engaging as the rest of your stories!
I'm liking the plot. The Lunar Corporation and what that might mean for all parties involved, along with the growing power of magic and enemies.
The politics, as always, get complicated and many things have to fall behind a red tap.
I enjoyed Minako's position as an agent within and agent corporation. XD Now, I have to ask...what is Ami's condition? Maybe I missed it, but I noticed the term used several times...I keep thinking she's preggers. .
Hmm, sounds like the girls were just as confused as the rest of the world is about them. And I think the questions will only continue to grow.
Once again you have me fascinated and eager for more. I'm just sorry I haven't been on to review every chapter.
Thank you so much, dear. You are too kind to me in many aspects.
And don't worry, sometimes I often forget to review myself. ;) But I am so happy to know you're inspired and continuing to write.
Keep it up!
| Nerf-or-Nothing 5/4/12 . chapter 3
People keep making me blush but it makes me really happy. What makes me even happier are the amount of updates and stories being produced lately, I'm grateful to all of you, it's not just me it's you guys c:
Another amazing chapter, and quick update I might add c: which is always great!
It's a short chapter then what you normally do but it's still incredable and I love it all the same, your doing another amazing story and I hope to see more from you soon.
BTW Makoto was so adorable, she gets so much trouble in your stories lol but I love it and feel bad all at the same time. Shame on me, but I do like the more mature themed stories best, with a darker edge or tone and less sillyness and fluff, but always add a LITTLE of that every now and then cause we all can't live without that, especially when times are hard c:
| Teeny 5/4/12 . chapter 3
i love the way you write
| Nerf-or-Nothing 5/2/12 . chapter 2
ALready gave you a lengthy reply and I'm extremely tired from work so I'll try to keep it short.
Your style of writing is amazing, and your great with character development. Your making me like Relena more c:
Duo is an awesome character. I know I'll always love Duo c:
| Nerf-or-Nothing 5/2/12 . chapter 1
AWH! You make me happy with such nice words! I really hope this section will blossom again some day with daily new story and updates lol I've been around long enough to remember when it was like that :c I miss that and I'm gonna do my best to bring it back to so. C: I'm even getting some of the older authors from those gold times to update! I hope I can reach more of them c:
Now onto the review!
As always your grammar, detail and description is among some of the best I've ever read and I am really jealous of your vocabulary and your ability to make smooth sentances with various words. You make me want to pick up a dictionary and a thesourous c; Really though, I do plan on doing that lol
Your dipiction of Minako reminds me of the Manga and I love it. Wufei as one of my favorite pilots, was described incredably well.
I'm glad to see more stories with Relena c; I like her character, but evil Relena is always fun too, though I doubt she'll be evil here and it makes me smile all the same!
ARTEMIS MADE ME SQUEAL I always found him quite the bishi when he appeared in the manga, more so in Naoko Takeuchi's artwork of him c: lajfklj He and Luna are both very attractive!
Can't wait to read more! Well actually I get to right now, as I didn't ger to review this when if first came out c:
| angelofvenus-l3 5/1/12 . chapter 2
A very interesting plot.I absolutely love the way you portray the characters so keep is one of the good ones,and I'm not just saying that because I'm a sucker for Trowa/Mina pairing;).Having said that,I am definitely looking forward for your updates.
| agoraphobia 5/1/12 . chapter 2
:) I like this so far! Keep up the good work!
| angelic.aquarian 5/1/12 . chapter 2
OMG another chapter already! YAY!
Do i see a Ami/Duo pairing? because if so love it!
haha even Wufei can't resist Mina's charm lol... I actually really like them as friends as he reminds me of Rei and Mina and Rei were like bestfriends in the manga.
You made me so happy i can't even describe by saying that it will be Mina/Trowa... It made me squeal like a fangirl! Can't wait.
The other couples don't bother me as much when those two are together.
I don't have the problem of swapping between couples as I have my absolute favourites and will stick to them or people will vote and that makes it a lot easier to stick to the couples lol. Plus a lot of readers are impatient so they don't mind you sticking with the pairings you set straight away lol.
Love this chapter and story and can't wait for more.
| angelic.aquarian 4/30/12 . chapter 1
Wow this story seems very interesting so far. I am glad Mina was a main bit of it so fair. She is my favourite character. I am curious to see where this story is going its very intriguing.
I am also very curious to know the pairings of it. I am biased to certain pairings (Mina/Trowa) but if its written well enough I can read any pairings I just prefer my favs.
Anyway I can't wait to read more and thanks for the little mention of me at the bottom it was sweet!