|Reviews for Love Lost|
| The Imaginatrix 6/11/13 . chapter 29
*squeals happily* VEEEEEEERAAAAAAA! I love that Xatu. I really do. And now we know where she got the awesome mind illusion thingy from! :D
Percival's a prat. An uncaring, insensitive PRAT. *smacks Percival upside the head*
| doc. zed 5/26/13 . chapter 1
| doc. zed 4/26/13 . chapter 28
ill admit this story is raunchy and gritty at times but i love it .truly a favorite
| Luckcu13 4/14/13 . chapter 27
Oh! I see why this is fanfiction called Love Lost now! This chapter is full of foreshadowing.
| doc. zed 4/13/13 . chapter 27
mothafuka :) took you forever! glad you heeded my call
| The Imaginatrix 3/10/13 . chapter 26
Finally mustered up the courage to read this chapter.
Have been sitting here trying to work out what Pokemon Harmony is. Still can't figure it out. I don't know whether you've mentioned her before and I forgot, but her exact species escapes me.
Okay, so Alice and Burner aren't on the rocks as far as their relationship goes, but I'm guessing some complication will arise involving either Ivana, whoever Alice's former trainer got on the wrong side of, or Alice's injuries. But then, you could surprise me.
And the mystery of Grace's visions or whatever they are is intriguing me. It's stuff like this that keeps me interested.
Thank you for more Iwamoto awesomeness. :D
I look forward to your review reply. They're always worth reading. You never waste a word you write.
| Luckcu13 2/16/13 . chapter 26
This story is great, and it has a much more mature theme to it then any other story I have seen on this website. I'm sometimes having trouble understanding some of your writing, but that may be because of my attention span, I've been having trouble concentrating. This needs more attention, and I'm hoping you can update soon. You've got my favorite, and I hope that more people will pay attention to this story.
| Rosco Peeko Trane 2/14/13 . chapter 26
Haha Gardevoir already knows about Scarlet now huh? XD
Also "trying to make another attack without tripping over Burner's prone form" I don't know if you did this intentionally to imply that Burner was laying on his stomach (the prone position) but I had assumed that he was on his back the entire time (the supine position.) Just wanted to say that in case you accidentally got the two positions mixed up.
Anyways, yet another fantastic chapter (and such a fast update!) Really looking forward to more )
| isaac1313 2/7/13 . chapter 25
Ah... I'm STILL enjoying this story. Your unique style of the pokemon world, and beautiful storyline. It has it's quirks: the oddeties, the akward moments, the missing parts filled with mystery. The overall base keeps me reading.
I just hope that everything turns out happily ever after, or I'm gonna REALLY be POed.
Hope it turns out great!
Oh, and great job keeping up constant updates. If you want, pm me.
| Rosco Peeko Trane 2/7/13 . chapter 25
Uh oh. The drama shall ensue I suppose. Thanks for updating, I'm looking forward to more. Also I just happened to notice that it allows us to look at a persons favorites, and I saw that your favorite is something that I might really like to read so thanks again :D
| The Imaginatrix 2/7/13 . chapter 25
Bet ten Poke-dollars Alice is gonna walk in on Burner and Ivana doing...THAT. (Shudders.) Poor thing. Hope Grace is there to tell her he's infatuated!
I'm interested to know how you use legendaries in your stories. Obviously they can breed and use Attract, unlike in the games, which means they are gendered. I'm also assuming that there's more than one of each legendary in your version of the Pokemon world, though they are still incredibly rare. This is evidenced by the Lugia family from a couple of chapters ago.
Alice needs to get away from that massage parlour and the perverts who frequent it. She makes great ravioli, so a cooking position would be ideal for her. Pull strings, Grace. Or anyone really, as long as Alice gets away from...THEM.
Nice to see the first half of another chapter so soon! I can't wait until next week! And at the same time, I'm dreading what's coming, especially when it comes to poor Alice seeing her mon cheating on her under the influence of Attract.
| Rosco Peeko Trane 2/6/13 . chapter 24
Well that was an interesting dream. Really looking forward to the next chapter now that I've caught up and I'm hoping to see more romance blossom between Joe and Grace c:
Also hoping that the title of this story "Love Lost" doesn't imply any significant impact on the outcome like a sad ending or anything, had to deal with that on one of my previous stories, I'd probably die if a similar thing happened on this one. Especially considering how great this one is.
| Rosco Peeko Trane 2/6/13 . chapter 22
Yay Alice is officially part of the family now :D
| Rosco Peeko Trane 2/6/13 . chapter 21
Damn Roscoe is a boss. I like how you made his character. And I'm not just saying that because of what my username says XD. I think you did a really good job portraying his character as an Alakazam c:
| Rosco Peeko Trane 2/5/13 . chapter 19
Poor Alice :C and wow Grace and Joe XD that whole thing was humorous and cute at the same time haha.