This is great great great great GREAT so far! I love how you write the canon folks; it's sooooooo nice to see you use them! ;w;

Kale is so precious, even if he's going through freaky puberty. I really hope he learns how to get his point across, or else there's going to be trouble all around!

Eddie freaking out about being mute is positively PERFECT. A, can't WAIT for more! :D