Oh I hope to read more on what happens.

oh, it's sad...Hamish is poor I think...

Nice chapter!

I feel sorry for Hamisch. He is despised by his uncle because of his mother. Yet I am sure this misunderstanding will be over very soon. Mycroft doesn't know how much Irene raised her son well.

Speaking about Hamisch, this boy is very clever for his age. he is just four-year-old and he understand lots of things. This is great. :)

I am glad his relation with his father improves a lot !

Bye; :)

You did rush it a bit, I had the feeling you felt nervous with the plot and that's why you rushed it. I like the concept of the story, and the photo detail from the book :) I would only suggest that you don't write these dense, long paragraphs like you did in the end, but in general, I liked it, and I would like to see how the relationship between Sherlock and his son improves.

Awesome start!

I feel so sorry for Hamish Adler.

I don't like when Irene is shot at all.

Yet i am sure Sherlock, John and Lestrade will find out who is the killer.

Moreover I would love seeing Sherlock's face when he learns he has a son.

Bye. :)

Oh this was a really really great story. The only thing I am annoyed with is that Irene died, but I always dislike it when people kill her off, cos I just have such a soft spot for her. I get that it's necessary for the story though.

I laughed out loud when I found out that Hamish solved the case before Sherlock did, well done with that part, I could really see that happening :)

Will there be another chapter to this, or will this stay as a oneshot?

Aussieflower x

This looks very promising. Hope you'll update soon, I'm looking forward to it! :D

Hope you continue this! Xx