Oh my gosh! you made Watanuki sooooooooooooo old! hahaha... But it was a great one-shot! I wish you made a second part. I wish I could ask Yuuko if she'd make you make a second chapter. _

noooooo not completeeeee! MOREE! please! :D loved it.

It's really sad that Doumeki had to die, but hey thats life. Everyone has to die someday.

Quite good