|Reviews for Pieces of the Puzzle|
| Kitty-Chan UchiNaru no Miko 1/28/13 . chapter 8
Ummm, you forgot the condoms in this part.
| mochiusagi 1/3/13 . chapter 8
Pfftttt ahahahhaha gotta love Chikage, sneaking info out of Kaito while he's absentminded. Ah, Kaito should have mentioned that he and Shinichi switch positions, sure uke indeed. More?
| Vacant Balcony 12/25/12 . chapter 8
You got me corrupted '
Super lemony chapter and I feel so ashamed saying I LUV IT ))
| Shara Raizel 12/24/12 . chapter 8
OMG! THIS WAS FANTASTIC! I don't know why you're so worried about writing smut. you're good at it. I LOVED this chapter. :)
| Sirastar 12/24/12 . chapter 8
That is interesting that Pandora and Shinichi mingle on strong emotions, but I am happy for Pandora that, that happens.
Finally action for him too . and it’s fun that Shinich has to fight with his own hormones, good for him that Kaito doesn’t complain about that .
The last comments form Chikage where great “So my baby-boy is a cute little uke” I couldn’t stop laughing .
I would vote that Kaito put no make up on his LOVEMARKS!
| foreverandeveralone 12/23/12 . chapter 8
It really amazes me how strong and...full of life they are... 5 or 6 times in one day...
But I'm not complaining! I really like it! They now literally cannot live without each other!
And love it! Kaito is a cute uke and Chikage knows!
| raziella 12/23/12 . chapter 8
so incredibly hot! And I find the end totally adorable! That you haven't made the stereotypical uke/seme relatioship is something I really admire, and love. Great chater, thanks for posting :D
| CAMIvH 12/23/12 . chapter 8
Kyaa! I think I am a yaoi obsessed perv!
Really good! \(/)\
| MysteryConan 12/23/12 . chapter 8
Waaaah shinichi's so horny! O/O
Kaito's mom is so awsome btw. xD
| Shara Raizel 10/17/12 . chapter 7
wow... that was hot! kaito has to top next time! oh! or maybe kaito gets stuck in the mind/dream world again and Pandora can join in too! XD
for your first time i thought that this was great!
As for me I'm still working on my own smut. :P
| foreverandeveralone 10/16/12 . chapter 7
This is HOT! OMG! Love it!
| Mai-chan63 10/16/12 . chapter 7
So good 8D that was amazing, absolutely loved it! The last part was adorable X3
Good luck with your exams btw!
| icarusdg 10/16/12 . chapter 7
First yaoi scene ever was very nice. Good job! XD
Some people don't even do that well the third time so be proud and come out from under the rock! XD
| mochiusagi 10/15/12 . chapter 7
Ohhh that was so hot! *wipes nose* great lemony chapter!
| Sirastar 10/15/12 . chapter 7
I Just have on comment about that Chapter:
That was yummy .