|Reviews for On the Line|
| lissy2110 5/25/13 . chapter 17
a fantastic story.
Thanks for writing.
| Dutchie La Rue 3/16/13 . chapter 17
I'm so happy you didn't have to do the wedding and went with the birth and start of their families! I love reading of how their lives evolved with each other, especially when all three had babies within months of each other! So cute! I love love love Jessica getting thrown out! bitch! hahahahahahahahhahahahahahaa aa...ew..Mrs. Newton..sick! hahahaha...thank you for sharing this story I loved it! ;)
| Dutchie La Rue 3/16/13 . chapter 10
I love the theme song to The Godfather...so haunting but lovely nonetheless...
| Dutchie La Rue 3/15/13 . chapter 8
| Dutchie La Rue 3/15/13 . chapter 7
Fck! I'm completely shocked by what James did for Bella! I thought he was acting like a prick! My bad...I know...I know...shouldn't judge..but James is always a creep in everything! Hahaha! I'm so happy Edward set Bella on a good path that will help her grow and really let her get to know herself and explore options for their future! Love that the gangs all making moves back to the ole original homestead! Sa-weet! ;)
| Dutchie La Rue 3/15/13 . chapter 6
Fck! James was delusional! How is it he had her receive his personal effects? She never once told him she loved him...sex sure...love NOT! FCKER! hahahaha! So strange. I love your Edward! Sa-weet man...so get in her face! ;)
| Dutchie La Rue 3/15/13 . chapter 4
Booooo James being a selfish prick! HIP HIP HOORAH he ain't coming back and velvety voiced Edward is finally on his way! ;)
| Dutchie La Rue 3/15/13 . chapter 3
I think its funny you couldn't decide who you were gonna be getting rid of...James or Mike! Haha! I really can't understand people who think they know best for other people!? Really don't even like to think about what people say dead people would want for others ...especially when they've never known the deceased! Putting words and thoughts into othersl peoples mouths and heads...scary! ;)
| Dutchie La Rue 3/15/13 . chapter 1
Oooooo I love this plot already! I found my way here reading your 1st chappy and loving it because of a rec from Pandora's Box Is Heavy! I love love love Pandora's FF and knew I would her rec as well...and I do...I'm off to your next chappy...hope you don't mind me posting so late in the game ;)
| My Friend Alice 12/13/12 . chapter 4
I just came across your fic and really like what I have read so far. I can't say that I liked the Bella and James pairing but that is just because Edward has ruined me for all men!
| cullenlover88 10/25/12 . chapter 17
| Twimima7 10/7/12 . chapter 16
I like this strong Bella. She really has gone through a lot. How she managed to stay sane is amazing and still found love. Thank you for this lovely story.
| Twimima7 10/7/12 . chapter 15
I can't believe Edward doing that to Bella. She was smart to leave him. I think she took him back too fast, Whats to say he isn't going wandering. Oh well. I guess she loves him enough to try. Hope it works out.
| Twimima7 10/7/12 . chapter 9
Well according to Riley and James dreams I can only hope he is missing in action. I hope. Poor Bella, it's a wonder she don't have a heart attack.
| Twimima7 10/7/12 . chapter 8
That was some scary dream. I believe it will come true. When is Charlie coming in to see Bella?