Yay

I can't even begin to describe how perfect that was.

This story is one of my all-time faves!

... more? XD

That may have been the best lemon/almost-lemon I have EVER read. With any pairing. Excellent grammar, plot, and vocab. I also loved how you kept them in character. PLEASE write more! PLEASE!

- Ginger Thai

Wow, just wow, you have a special gift at writing. The characterization was true to how Dalex would react to the situation. I truly hope we can expect more from you in this vein, I'm not sure what else to add that people have not already said. Again fabulous job.

I can imagine this happening down the line. This is good. Will there be more?

Well written, you know, without any spelling or grammatical mistakes (the highest complimnet I can give to any story), the plot is reasonable, and the story is very funny, teehee indeed. I enjoy it when authors go the extra step for their stories, like you contributing German. Although I have to agree with Deryn, "barking prudes" indeed.

This was Great, you did a wonderful job of there characters and there weren't any confusing mistakes! (thank god) And you are right, hurray for almost-lemons! i am a bit on the younger side, so full on lemons are a bit much for me still. Unfortunitly I still find other fics to not quite be enough, if you know what I mean. It was nice to find a fic that didn't take things to far but was still a little on the M rated side. Thank you and I would love to read more of your stuff!

3 Ella

Very good, but you should put this under M. A semi-lemon is still a lemon

... ah ha mazing

Haha slightly awkward to read.. But it was really insteresting! And they were both totally in character! Sweeeetness

Yowza.

This. Is. Glorious.

PLEASE WRITE MORE ALONG THESE LINES, okay? :33

(Apologies for not offering a more in-depth analysis, but doubtless someone else will, if they have not already. I am not good with analysises. :(( Anyway, thank you for writing this and please write more Leviathan fic! :DD)

Very well done, although this should probabely be M in my opinion.

I noticed that Deryn seems very angry at first, a lot angrier than, well any point in the books by far.