I was somewhat disappointed when Ba'al died in cannon and I am looking forward to seeing what kind of trouble he can stir up. Also I can't help but laugh a little at the Lucian Alliance, and I think you have done an excellent job of capturing their mindset.

Well, I guess I was right-ish about the Romans. I am now going to go investigate the 9th Legion and see if they really disappeared. Unless you based their story on the 9th Platoon, which I am also going to go look in to.

Tomorrow I being chapter nine.

The first half of this chapter reminded me of when Sheppard and Ronon were on Earth helping with the Trust problem, although I cannot remember the exact episode(s). And I look forward to finding out what my favorite Furling is up to. Overall great fic so far. I am beginning to see some of the darkness you referred to building on the horizon and I am curious to see how and when it strikes.

On to chapter eight.

No new developments in my hypothesis, but whilst reading the end of thus chapter the only thing I could think of was Vegas, the second to last episode of SGA.

Well, my hypothesis has been refined somewhat. Or rather had its list of potential scenarios has been shortened. My best guess as it stands right now is that either Romans were taken off world and developed very quickly after being abandoned by or over throwing the Goa'uld that took them there. Or something else, but I am unsure what that something else is.

Those theories I mentioned are starting to take on a clearer shape. My running hypnosis is that the Goa'uld who landed on Earth in the second chapter landed on a second Earth. One where Rome never fell.

As promised here is my first review of a full chapter. And I'm pleased to say that you certainly have my attention. I have a few theories developing, but I think I shall let them blossom a little more before I put voice to them.

Now on to chapter three.

So, having just finished A New Dawn I'm plunging head long into this one. And so the race begins, between me trying to catch up to where the story is now and you adding new chapters. I will make an effort to review after each chapter this time around.

Great chapter can't wait for the next though I hope it's less political based and more attacking the Lucian's

Hi there,
Will Earth discover the damage inflicted to Arkos and request that assistance of the ascended Ancients in its repair?
Also will they discover the crippled/seriously fraked up Asuran copy of Atlantis on the unnamed waterworld in the Pegasus Galaxy? If so will they recover it and rebuild it to the standard of Atlantis and her sisters?

The idea of a untied Earth is a wonderful dream but those who want true freedom will see its formation as a threat to liberty. The politicians like senators Ron and Rand Paul along with former Minnesota Governor Jesse Ventura will see this a threat and destruction of the US constitution and bill of rights and the destruction of the US economy. A single currency will not work just look at the Euro. I can see many people rising up to oppose the formation of a 1 world government. Also the info warrior Alex Jones and all alternate media will see the announcement of the formation of a 1 world government as a blatant assault on civil liberties and the god given freedom of all free people. He would rally as many Americans to PROTECT and DEFEND the Constitution of the USA and the republic on which it stands.
Like Benjamin Franklin says "They who can give up essential liberty to obtain a little temporary safety, deserve neither liberty nor safety".
Whilst coming together for the safety of earth is a good thing there will be alot of people the true free thinkers that want true freedom will oppose its formation [1 world government] unless this new world order is willing to use the Ark of Truth to violate the Free Will of the masses to get what they want. I can see civil wars starting in many nations between those who want to retain there freedoms form government and those who have been in-doctored into "the System".
I can see ships being stolen [maybe a cityship] and used against those controlled by the government and to evacuate as many of those opposed to the suspected Totalitarian Government to a system that earth can't find them.

Nice title.

Great chapter! I can't wait to see what we do to the Lucians in the future!

In order to cripple and divide earth he LA achieved the opposite. E

Ce chapitre est vraiment sympa . Elle met en place une Terre qui sera intransigeante contre les menaces qui veulent la détruire . Ah Quand est ce que le prochain chapitre arrivera