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I think you managed to capture all the contradictions we seemed to get from season 1 Lee. He can go from dismissing her to committing treason for her in the space of a second, and he did seem a bit stunned in "Sudden Death." I liked this.

This was great! I haven't seen S&MK in a long long time. Hmmm...

i can see him wrestling with this dilemma. how dare she make him think! well done

You did a beautiful job of show-casing Lee's thoughts and feelings as he struggled to understand the annoying Mrs. King.

To many, he seemed shallow in season one, but you scratched the surface and revealed Lee's complicated layers and hidden depths. You even found the spark of attraction already igniting in the emotionally closed-off agent. Great character study!

I hope you'll write another one soon.

What a great story! How ironic that I was just watching this episode the other evening and was thinking about how that kiss affected Lee. You read my mind!

What a fantastic one-shot. I am so glad my nagging paid off. I think you really got the essence of s1 Lee. Your descriptions of him trying to fight off the spark he felt with Amanda were excellent. Thanks for sharing, and I hope to see more SMK from you.