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| Reviews for Demon's Slave |
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   kyoandyuya 2/9/13 . chapter 3oh please! i wanna read more! |
| 120991ln 10/11/12 . chapter 1 continue loving the story |
| EclipseLove 7/22/12 . chapter 3 Awesome! |
| Cosmic-lover 5/12/12 . chapter 3 I have to say I really liked reading the first three chapters! I mean at first I wasn't so sure since Battosai seemed a bit rough around the edges and a bit mean to Kaoru buuut after that, their interaction with each other was really enjoyable! I love the way you're portraying both his and Kaoru's characters. It'll be interesting to see how Battosai deals with Tomoe's threats. Update again soon please, I want to know what'll happen in the next chapter :) |
| JeniNeji 5/10/12 . chapter 3 Still intrigued :) Thanks for writing! |
| JeniNeji 5/10/12 . chapter 2 Wow... she's so direct about it and the council does nothing. Huh, Im surprised he didnt simply kill her right there :) |
| JeniNeji 5/10/12 . chapter 1 lol! Poor Kenshin! |
| The Musings of a Muse 5/9/12 . chapter 3 Ah politics. Where in the world would we be without his corrupted, tarnished and admittedly amusing form of government? lol this chapter was awesome! Would you do one from Kaoru's point of view? I think it'll add some diversity to the story to mix up the POV's once in a while; that's just my opinion though. Anyways, I'm already waiting for he next chapter .! See you soon -Ciao -Kaisuikage |
| The Musings of a Muse 5/6/12 . chapter 2 Hm... This is an interesting idea. I've never thought of something like this before. I wish you would explain the whole demon vs human thing though; are their worlds separate? Do humans only work as slaves? Do they live in a nexus with different realms? I like this story so far, actually, it's holding my attention really well! I can't wait to see what you do with future chapters! |
| Brukaoru 5/5/12 . chapter 2 Ooh! I really like this! The plot is very intriguing. I'd love to see this continued. Aside from some grammar mistakes in chapter 1, my only suggestion would be that I think the beginning of the story could use more of an introduction to the plot. It kinda just seems to start in the middle of nowhere. Hope you continue this! |
| Royal Orchid 5/4/12 . chapter 2 Really liking your story! Can't wait for the next update! |
| Queen Emily the Diligent 5/3/12 . chapter 1 Sounds really good keep it up |
| Royal Orchid 5/2/12 . chapter 1 Oh I like the start! Please update soon! Can't wait to read what happens next! |
| Shadow Girl 5/1/12 . chapter 1 Interesting... And, no, I haven't read the Angel Diaries, which is good since... no spoilers for me! Yay! Update soon :) |
