For the love of all that is holy wright more...that was so god i cant wait to see what you do with this story...
PLEASE WRIGHT MORE...PLEASE.
THANK YOU

this is really great!! I know you said you were out of the DBZ thing right now, but please write more. this is a story with great potential. please write more.

That was a vey good ch. Please soooo continue.

Hi. I raed the first chapter and it is very good.
I hope you get all the chapyer up soon. I'm sorry
if this submit review suck.It is my first review. But i think this chapter is very cool.
bye

Wow! This sounds really interesting so far! It's got alot of mystery to it and your style of writing really kept me reading. ^_^ I'll definitely be waiting for the next chapters!

WOW !!! That was SUGOI!!!!
I wanna read more
pleaaaaaaaaaaaase hurry
(^.^)

Oh gosh I love it! Please write more!

Alrighty then. I won't kill you for that chapter length...I must admit I'm tempted though... just kidding. ^_^ Very very nicely done. Good writing style and a very original idea. can't wait to see the next chapter.

Hi,
I must say what I read is very good. And from what you said it is going to be a great Fic. I hope you update soon!!!

Ri-nee-chan

What's happening to Chichi? Write the next chapter soon!

I loved it so far. Very original. Write more please!

oh no! cliffhanger... please continue it.....i love it...... thanks for making this one :):):)

Cool nicely done