Thanks for the helping hand I was just trying something new but thanks I may or not do it again I was just trying something new but again thanks

Hi Baby Bodyguard! It's nice that you've tried to write your own story for our favourite movie. I like the idea and of course the proposal, but I think that your story needs proofreading. It has many mistakes, especially spelling mistakes and that makes me read it twice to make sure I understood correctly. I'm sorry for criticism,but it's constructive, especially since I'm a foreigner and my English isn't that good, but I have my fantastic proofreader to check my stories and therefore I'm not worried ;)

It's because I care about this story and find it cute :)

adorable.