| Reviews for The Sacred Pyramid |
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AnnaYasashii 2/9/13 . chapter 1I already love this story. Update |
deviousTaurus 7/7/12 . chapter 1Riodan already did this. Kan Chronicle. Red Pyramid»Throne of Fire»Serpant's Shadow |
HyperSammy22 5/24/12 . chapter 2Not bad MrCullenCo! But you didn't have a lot of details you skipped a lot of stuff. Like who was the random guy who wanted to fight you? And you don't get anything out of the 2nd chapter... It's just archery class! And you barely know anything about how it went either. So work on that... Oh and have you ever heard of the Kane Chronicles? |
Banestar 5/22/12 . chapter 1actually this idea is already taken. It's called the kane chronicles. |