|Reviews for The Third Lieutenant's Lady|
| Emma 4/9/13 . chapter 22
Wow I have just read this for a second time and its still just as fabulous as the first time I read it I've read loads of master and commander fan fictions and no doubt about it this one Is favourite
I loved it so much I really would be over joyed if you could write another master and commander fan fiction or maybe a fan fiction on something else like titanic or pirates of the Caribbean or just something ,anything
Your work is just so great I must read more
Keep it up
Bye for now
| Emma 3/25/13 . chapter 22
Wow, very very good
I love the twists and I could tell that you really understood the characters
Maybe for your next fan fiction you could do something on the captins daughter
Good luck with all your writing
| yasupoimegane 5/22/12 . chapter 22
Hello there, Now the story is officailly over, once again I thank you for your hard work and dedication! I really loved this story, I had a very fun time reading it, thank you! Well done!
| The.Teal.Rose 5/22/12 . chapter 22
You have my applause! This was an amazing story and the characters were all wonderfully depicted. The ending was perfect and sweet, an ending I wish Mr. Calamy could have enjoyed in canon. Victoria was outstanding and was such a perfect match for Peter. You were so convincing that I could really picture her aboard the surprise. Thank you so much for this beautiful addition to this site :)
| yasupoimegane 5/21/12 . chapter 21
Hello there, only one more chapter! No more of the routine of checking each day when I return home from school for a new chapter. I thank you for your hard work and dedication towards this story! Well done!
| The.Teal.Rose 5/21/12 . chapter 21
aww, another sweet chapter. I could literally feel Peter's nervousness when he approached her father. So happy it turned out well though :) Its sad that this will be ending soon but, it has been a very pleasant read.
| yasupoimegane 5/20/12 . chapter 20
Hello there, it's sad that the story will end soon, but I suppose all stories must end at some point. Anyway, another great chapter, Well done!
| yasupoimegane 5/19/12 . chapter 19
Hello there, I really wasn't expecting her to resort to that, I thought she would just knock him out or something, but apparently not. I can't even imagine what it would feel like to be in her shoes, I hope she doesn't let it bother her for too long. Another fantastic chapter, well done!
| yasupoimegane 5/19/12 . chapter 18
Hello there, I'm amazed at how calm Hastings is, I'd have a panic attack! I hope that french guy who has pinned her down gets it before he can do anything. I have some theories as to what he is going to do and not one of 'em are very pleasant at all. Another brilliant chapter, well done!
| yasupoimegane 5/19/12 . chapter 17
Hello there, as it seems you won't be ending the story the way the movie did, and for that I am very happy! I really did not like the ending of the movie, it forced me to imagine the rest. And lets just say, my visualizations aren't as interesting to watch as a Peter Weir film. Yet another awesome chapter, well done!
| The.Teal.Rose 5/18/12 . chapter 16
You did a really good job filling in the blanks concerning Peter's participation in the capture of the french ship. I am also so relieved that he didn't get killed during that. I hope he makes it through the fever, however. :) The moments between he and Victoria during all of that were amazing.
| yasupoimegane 5/18/12 . chapter 16
Hello there, I know how Calamy feels when it comes to fevers, I had one a couple days ago. And now I'm sick again, it just never ends! First Calamy gets stabbed, gets a bit better, then get sick, it doesn't seem to end for him either. Anyway, another brilliant chapter!
| yasupoimegane 5/18/12 . chapter 15
Hello there, I'm crossing my fingers so that Calamy won't die! Anyway, I love the way you decribed the fight scene, usually I can't really understand what's happening in fights scenes, there to all over. But I was able to visualize this fight scene very well, well done!
| The.Teal.Rose 5/17/12 . chapter 14
Well of course you have to add a kiss, never mind the socially accepted conduct of the time, circumstances such as that are completely understandable and you handled it very well :) It was a touching moment, though I am really nervous now to see what will become of Peter.
| yasupoimegane 5/17/12 . chapter 13
Hello there, The romance has finally started! I'm so happy!
The Acherons coming just had to ruin the moment at the end of the chapter, though! Anyway, awesome chapters (as you can see I didn't get to leave a review on chapter 12.)! Well done!