this is great. I was smiling like a fool the whole time I was reading it :) and then I actually laughed out loud at the last lines.

but the rest of it was great, too. Neville's got to learn to give himself more credit!

I absolutely this. It was just simply amazing. I can understand you having to make it AU, but the way you did the characters was really good. I this was amazing, and I can't seem to stop complimenting it. XD

I think it is kind of funny, you gave Tonks my hair. XD

Great Job! :D

This was cute. I am normally one for canon as well but i think you did a very good job with the challenge. I think you've kept Neville in character except that I don't believe he would have bet against Gryffindor. I didn't see any issues with grammar or spelling either.

Good Job

Tonks is one of my favorite characters! And you wrote them both very well. I really like how you show us the similarities between Tonks and Neville. Though, I would like to point out that Harry Potter Wiki says that Neville was in fact an Auror before teaching.

Also, the betting. I'm a huge sucker for bets and yours was perfect. I was shocked to see that Neville was betting against his own house but it won the bet, so it's not all bad. Haha.

I like what hair color you gave Tonks. Since we have no clue, it's very nice to see what you think her real hair color is.

Overall, lovely.