|Reviews for Apprentices|
| magic135 9/8/12 . chapter 1
i love it
| NeneKanerva 8/26/12 . chapter 24
HOW DARE YOU? To tease me like this? I'm dying from the suspense! Really, how can you call my fics exciting? o.o ;D
Gosh, please update soon.
Heh, really... If I'm really making this into a manga when this is finished... These will be the hardest scenes to draw. I just know it.
| NeneKanerva 8/12/12 . chapter 23
You know my dark side already. Yôchina, cute and cheery like Alala xDD PM of her looks coming soon.
AND THANK YOU! Me and Emi got very annoyed of the posting of Deep Blue and Orange princesses when tey are taken already.
Then the review...
I'm scared D: It's so full of suspense! And then you call R&R exciting -_-'''
Agh, how I wanted Mai to kill the stupid bitch Arika. But it's Mikus job. DX
OMIGOSH Miku can fight!
Hey, I know! Mai can drive over Arika with her motorbike! xDDD
Hey I dunno if I'm the first one to notice.
But, Arika and Akira are pretty similar.
Nah, it's probably just me.
NAINA AND ASH!
OK NOT THIS FREAKING STUFF NOW NENE! D
It's not Arikas Sebby, it's Mikus Sebby.
And what you say to me?
It's not Tsubasas Mai, it's Tenchis Mai.
| Snow-Loftwing 8/12/12 . chapter 23
I love it :D It was awesome :D
NUH! Don't let Hikaru get you girls! Kick him in the nuts or something!
C'mon Mai! Let's go save them! *walks away with Mai*
| nonixd 8/5/12 . chapter 22
Fanfiction still hating. But i will put nonixd still. I hope you get better and update soon. I love the couple -
I noticed that i didn't put the length of the hair for Ayano Suzuki (Orange Mermaid Character) It is waist length hair and in Idol & Mermaid form it is Long enought that it touches the floor. I also forgot to mention that she always wears a orange-red sun hairpin in her hair (Only in Normal form).
Take care Update Soon... -
| NeneKanerva 8/4/12 . chapter 22
Ahaha, the most awesome thing everrr xDDD You have earned me some laughs, did you know that? ;DD Mai in a frilly dress, high heels and jewellery? o.- Reminds me of one of my super old fics, where Mimi is wearing stuff like that. And ofc, even the same reactions. You are genious.
I personally adored this chappie, even though it was short. You are good at Mais point of view ;D
| 9Emi9 8/4/12 . chapter 22
No matter if it short or not, But i love this. Ikuto niisaaaaan btw should i upload my AP art..?. YES i draw AP alot. Mai is Fun to draw. I love her hair. But tenchi is very very cute, so he is Fun to draw too. So i draw those alot. And ofcourse my OC Naina.
| Snow-Loftwing 8/3/12 . chapter 22
YAY FOR TENCHI X MAI FLUFFLINESS :D
I NEED MOARRRRRR
I love Mai, she's so cute :D
Great chapter! Update soon :D
| Guest 7/31/12 . chapter 21
| nonixd 7/30/12 . chapter 1
Im back, Sorry, i think i missed some stuff. If i missed more tell me! -
Likes: Surfing, Singing, Surfing, Rapping, Songwriting (To express herself), Cooking/Baking, Sports, & the ocean
Dislikes: Bullies, Cheaters, Haters, Players, Crying, Showing her weak side & Hurting people
Hobbies: Drawing, Martial Arts, Sports, Swimming, Surfing, Working Out, Singing, Songwritting & Reading
Relationship Status- Single
Looking For In A Person- Accepts her how she is, Kind & Nice
Body- Fit, Curvey, Skinny & Has a toned body because she works out
Surfing Look: Wears a wet suit
Extra: Is very innocent, Surf board is from the U.S. and is very important to her, Dense at times & She surfs or swims when needs to relax
| nonixd 7/30/12 . chapter 21
Its me again sorry. In the Idol Look by white i meant the light orange in Seira's look. Sorry again. I hoope you havent picked a orange mermaid yet if you did or didn't please consider mine for the running. Update soon and i hope i end up to be the orange mermaid. Update -
| nonixd 7/30/12 . chapter 21
My account is nonixd though fanfiction is hating on me. I hope i get to be the orange mermaid.
Name: Ayano Suzuki
School Look: She has nerdy glasses (In Mermaid or Idol form she doesnt need them) but she does have contacts though doesnt use them. Her hair is a dark brown that is mistaken as black with one dark (Sun like color) orange highlight in a ponytail. She wears the girl uniform with skinny jeans underneath her skirt so its 'leagal'
Mermaid Look- Has dark orange hair (Like the sun) with light brown, and creamy peach highlights. Her eyes are a dark orange eyes (like the sun) with some brown. Has a dark orange (Like the sun) shell bikini top. Her tail is dark orange (Like the sun) with a creamy peach outline of the sun on the end of her tail.
Idol Look- Her outfit is the same except the orange, is glittery and darker (Like the sun), while the white is a nice creamy peach color. (The eyes and hair is the same from the Mermaid look)
Personality: She is a tomboy/nerd. She is quiet, smart, shy and has a dark aura around her so that people dont approach her because she used to be bullied. She can be cheerful, happy and hyper-active once she is close to people. She is very protective and hot tempered. She tends to change her aura though it is barely noticedable only if you are really close to her. She tends to use a poker face to mask her feelings.
Information: She hates skirts and dresses though she will be willing to if a good reason is stated. She loves reading, playing instruments, song writting to pour her feelings in them, cooking/baking, rapping, dancing, ice cream and sweets. She tends to act like a tomboy and rarely blushes. She plays with her fingers or bites her lip when nervous. She is a transfer student from the United States though she is Half-Japanese and American. She travels by motorcycle. She is a surfer and loves a challenge. She is a well known surfer in the U.S. and swimmer. She also loves sports and the ocean to calm herself.
| Shimmer-White Mermaid 7/31/12 . chapter 4
Oh and her drees is just like Noelle's and can you plz try and make a Noelle upgrade dress not how it looks in the real MMP and and the under the drees and purple that match Noelle's frills.
PLZ PUT ME IN THE SRORRY SRRY IF I SEMM CLINGY I JUST REALLY WANT THIS STOPING NOW! SRRY.
| Shimmer-White Mermaid 7/31/12 . chapter 3
Hey okie so here is my entrie for Minni Deep Blue Voice
Hair:Black and Curly
Skin: African American
Eyes: Really Dark Brown Almost Black
Body Type: Kinda Short like me 4ft 11 at 12 :(
Personality: Really Happy And Smily ,But A Really Mean Thing Can Make Her Feel Bad(Like Me :( ) But Bounches Back Quikly. Really Silly Dosen't Seem Like A ( How Old Are Miku And Yumi ). She Is Really Smart And When The Team Really Needs It She I Supper Serious.
Hair: Powder blue like Noelle's but shorther
Eye: Like Noelle's
Tail: Like Noelle's And The Special Feture Is A Music Note Or Sea Hourse
She Has A Crush On Mashihiro And Thinks Of Kaito As A Big Brother (Hope Luchia Wont Get Jelous)
Really Dislikes Alala For Calling Her Uncute #1 Rival.
Name: Netalia (Nelly)
Age: As Old As Miku And Yumi.
If you need to know more Orivate message me.
| Shimmer-White Mermaid 7/31/12 . chapter 1
Hi I was so excited I hade to write this now I wanna be the deep blue pearl srry only read won chapter hope it not taken. Name: Netallia(Nelly). She is the minie deep blue voice (noelle love ) I will write more leather though.