*sniffle* It's beautiful.

Aww that made me smile :)

I know you're not entirely satisfied with this, but I do love it! My favorite scene is when they actually see her bending for the first time after her face-off with Amon... And you know, even though I'm reading this after seeing episode five, I think this still applies pretty well. It's like filling in all of the blanks in a way.

Great!

AWESOME STORY. SHAFDSJFHASHFSKFDKSHK

you're a fantastic writer! very thought-provoking.

did you see episode 5?

bolin's crying might possibly have changed my pairing to borra. D:

but i really don't care who ends up with who, as long as korra kicks amon's butt in the coolest way possible. :D

I really liked this. I think you did a lovely job. Keep up the great work!

YAY MAKORRA! Actually, I'm partial to Bolin after the recent episode, but this was really well-written. Kudos to you!

This just brought all my thoughts back to Ep. 5 when Korra accuses Mako of thinking of her, Korra, when he is with Asami. Why must your fic be so canon? I don't think that anyone was intending to hurt in this situation, and I like how Mako is very well aware that he is attracted to Korra and that she is fantastic but he also has obligations to Asami. Just. So many feelings and Bolin. Oh. Bolin. And Asami being the upright, classy girl that she is, this makes this so sad and apsiodhfapoisdjfpaoijf. Great fic. So many thoughts and the imagery was gorgeous too! :D

this was really good! i think you have their characterizations down, for 4 episodes into the series anyway :)

some beautiful descriptions here; I could really picture how Korra was bending, how she was perceived by her friends. A wonderful piece:)

...WELL THIS HURTS. THANKS, ANNIE. IT'S LIKE NINE AM, AND I'M ALREADY CRYING. I MEAN WITH THE BEAUTIFUL AND THE SUNLIGHT AND THE- MY HEART. IT HURTS.

I LOVE YOU.

BUT IT HURTS.

/back to crying over Korra now

ANNIE WHAT THE HELL YOU HAVE TO TELL SOMEONE-ME-WHEN YOU DO THESE KINDS OF THINGS OR MAYBE I SHOULD JUST ALERT YOU OR SOMETHING SAME THING GOD

I'm at a loss of words here. This is so good.

Korra needs to stay strong! She has to keep her head up!

I really hope she come back to being the strong Korra we all know in episode 5:)

I like this. This is like how it might actually run out

Good actually.

I loved it

This is absolutely amazing! It's a work of literature, I'm not even kidding. I like the way you handled post Amon Korra. You went at it from a different angle than everyone else and it was refreshing and, I think, realistic. Mako was very in character (along with everyone else) and I can see him thinking these things. I wish this were a multiple-chapter fic! Over all, bravo and please continue to write for this fandom as you are amazing.